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Childhood
Photo Information
Copyright: Giuseppe Franchina (gieffe88) (38)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2010-04-05
Categories: Portrait
Camera: FujiFilm Finepix S2000HD, Fujinon 15X Zoom Lens f 28-400, 8 GB SD
Exposure: f/4.9, 1/300 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-04-06 3:36
Viewed: 1989
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A portrait of a little child with no clear face for envolving the whole childhood in the world.
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To rewshearer: red colourgieffe88 1 04-07 05:41
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Hi Giuseppe

I understand your reasoning for using PP on her face, but to me it just becomes a frustration - her face is shown, we want to see it! Perhaps if her face was turned away from the camera it would be more poignant?

I also don't understand why you have left the headband in colour.

The shot definitely caught my eye as a thumbnail but those two post-processing elements ruin it for me.

Just my personal opinion, though! :)

Rew

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