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Paula 3


Paula 3
Photo Information
Copyright: Fabio Valenti (dijilny) (283)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-11-21
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D
Exposure: f/4, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-06-04 2:56
Viewed: 2410
Points: 13
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Paula
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Hello, Fabio -
Gorgeous model, very alluring glamour portrait. The lighting seems to make her skin glow against the dark background. Very sensual pose. Nice balanced composition. The b&w gives it a classic feel. Hard to pass this thumbnail without opening - it's very sexy. Well done.

Hello Fabio,

Excellent portrait with attractive pose. The black and white is well chosen. The hair merging with the background works well actually. There is a sense of casual sensuality which is very skilfully presented.

Regards,
Siddhartha

  • Good 
  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 818 W: 84 N: 1189] (10601)
  • [2010-06-04 5:26]

The pose is nice, and she's beautiful. Unfortunately the contrast is too high that makes you lost the details in the shadow areas. Also the light on the face and chest is way to hard imo

Yan

  • Great 
  • Raju Silver Star Critiquer [C: 14 W: 0 N: 0] (147)
  • [2010-06-04 5:52]

Gorgeous model,The pose is nice,Excellent portrait with attractive pose,But Unfortunately the contrast is too high.
Regard Raju.....

Hi Fabio..this is a nice studio shot...your composition is nicely balanced and the high contrast tones work well to give some drama to the shot...I like the floor in the shot...I have struggled with what to put under the model and this works well...

Roger

  • Great 
  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 17 N: 295] (2116)
  • [2010-06-06 6:22]

She looks like a slightly soiled angel (the highlight on the background seems to be a wing) ready to fly away. There is great sensuality in the frame. I like the B/W effect. Very pretty model too.

Linda mulher, excelente fotografia em P&B!

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