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Beyond... (Freedom)


Beyond... (Freedom)
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Copyright: Alessio Vergassola (Ilduca-bianco) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 114 W: 38 N: 139] (491)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2011-02-03
Categories: Abstract
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): a photo, an eye wink [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2011-04-20 11:56
Viewed: 2092
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Qualche tempo fà, su questo sito, vidi una foto di ErikSven intitolata "Winter Knot".Ne fui piacevolmente colpito, in particolar modo dall'astrazione che è possibile trarre anche dalle cose più concrete.Una mattina fredda di questo inverno, appena uscito dall'albergo in cui alloggiavo, mi sono imbattuto nelle orme di un capriolo (Capreolus Capreolus) che distintamente si allontanavano nella neve da un recinto di filo spinato.Uno splendido esempio di libertà che solo la natura può dare.

Immagine a colori convertita in B/N tramite desaturazione, contrasto aumentato del 100% e luminosità abbassata del 20%.

Some time ago, on this website, i saw an ErikSven's photo titled "Winter Knot".I was pleasantly impressed by it, particularly by the abstraction that can be drawn also from most concrete things.One cold morning of last winter, just out from the hotel where i was staying, i stumbled on the tracks of a roe deer (Capreolus Capreolus) that clearly departed in the snow from a barbed wire fence.A splendid example of freedom that only nature can give.

Colour image converted into B/W by desaturation, contrast 100% increase and brightness 20% lowered.

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Hello Alessio,

I like it that you have been inspired by another photographer and adapted the idea to your own photograph.
This is minimalistic; like a story that has been told by clues rather than the whole scenario.
Good use of thirds composition, and with the trail leading diagonally towards a corner.

My warm regards,
Bev :-)

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  • WasP Silver Star Critiquer [C: 30 W: 8 N: 4] (87)
  • [2011-04-20 14:20]

Tam da şuana ait bi foto oldu bu gerçekten çok güzel...
TFS

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 13 N: 1404] (6384)
  • [2011-04-22 3:06]

Hi Alessio,
I like the mood in your shot and the lack of colour with the strong white of the snow and dark silhouette of the fence, nice minimal shot giving a big picture, like it. Best wishes
Bri

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  • andrei Gold Star Critiquer [C: 254 W: 1 N: 226] (1664)
  • [2011-04-23 14:52]

Alession
Simple and very powerful. Works weel in B&W. No burnout on the snow and black in the fence.
TFS
Andrei

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2011-05-18 5:23]

Hlelo

Superbe compo et iamge, avec les traces sur la neige cette barrière aux barbelé, ennemi public, ce poteau de bois quel contraste.

bravo et maitié

Nicou

Very original abstract like artistic capture...perfect exposure with good use of leading lines and the shear simplicity of this shot makes it special- well done!

Regards,

Dilshan

Alessio,

C'est vrai que ça ressemble au style de photo d'ErikSven, bel exercice.
L'atmosphère est particulière , entre la nostalgie et la poésie. Beau travail.
Excellent pov mettant en avant ces poteaux et barbelés laissant les empreintes dans la neige rejoindre le chemin de la liberté.
C'est bien équilibré et pensé. bravo.

;o)

I only now discover this photo, Alessio. Thanks for the eye wink ;o).

Of course I like this kind of shots. You achieved a minimalistic yet subtle composition, with an interesting play of lines. The diagonal of the traces in the snow is an extra.

Compared with my photo, you did a better job on light management I think: your snow is less greyish than on my photo and you have nice nuances and textures in it.

TFS & kind regards,
Erik

Ciao Alessio
sì, è una foto davvero potente per il senso di libertà, di possibilità che subito trasmette. il filo spinato è fortemente evocativo, ma la tua idea per questa compo è stata geniale. davvero tanti complimenti, è davvero una foto che "tocca".
buona serata
S.

Hi Alessio, this one caught my eye going for a stroll through your gallery. It reminds me of time spent living in the snow and seeing the untouched snow with just a single set of animal tracks like these.I swear sometimes they must fly over the fences.. Fiona

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