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sweet nap time

sweet nap time
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Copyright: Janek Kloss (moli) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1349 W: 256 N: 2110] (13344)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-03
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: SONY DSC-S40
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): m o l i [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-01-08 10:07
Viewed: 2538
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Sweet nap time. This is double buggy and my young daughter is on the back. Two of them had a nap in the same time and I had a bit time to capture it ;)

This is our favorite place to go for a walk. Royal Hospital Kilmainham

The Royal Hospital Kilmainham is a mile and a half west of the city centre and at the time of its construction the site was part of the Phoenix Park. Designed as a home for invalided soldiers, the Royal Hospital at Kilmainham was the first major public building to be constructed in Dublin.

At the moment there is a Irish Museum of Modern Art.

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I like the space in this photo, and the children innocently sleeping. Good touch with the sepia tone. Nice Work.

very nice mate!the pov is superbe ,same for the sharp and ,just a bit "red" maybe,a lower sepia woul have works better ,not sure ,but a crop on the sides yes im sure:)
see you soon

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  • miuky Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 25 N: 234] (1305)
  • [2007-01-08 10:57]

exellent pp job, and a great POV
regards, M.

lovely composition, nice pp work, very well done

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  • clnaef Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 996 W: 54 N: 31] (5769)
  • [2007-01-08 11:35]

Jolie composition bien mise en scène.
Bonne journée.

Cześć Janek!
Podoba mi się kompozycja,sam pomysł i bichromia.Niezłe,kurcze,niezłe.

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1397 W: 6 N: 1920] (10153)
  • [2007-01-08 12:02]
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Wspaniale PP Zdjecie,Twoj spacer wspaniale odzwieciedla Twoje zdjecie.Bardzo podoba mi sie ta praca.
Serdecznie pozdrawiam.

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  • gnc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 730 W: 10 N: 104] (1449)
  • [2007-01-08 13:42]
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Excellent pp treatment and pov capture of this sleeping tyke. Great you were able to capture the square empty (or removed the people in PS). Good work!


Pretty photo and well PP! I like this central position of the child in the empty square…

Cześć Janek!
Nie wiem czy dobrze pamiętam,ale w którymś odcinku było spotkanie J-23 z kontaktem z centrali w parku.I tam też stał wózek z dzieckiem.
P.S.Uwaga na Brunnera.

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  • wenqing Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1494 W: 102 N: 2012] (11873)
  • [2007-01-09 8:23]
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i like this comp hans :)
i like the contrast between the sleeping baby and graphism of the ground and building :)
nice work

Nice compo, nice shot, I like color tones,
well done !

Hi Hans,
Love the PP work on this one, the dramatic angle and traditional setting makes it look kinda spooky though, which is good, maybe not what it seems like to you but it is the effect I am getting from it. Great sharpness and I really like the sepia tone you have created. I do think that showing more paving in the foreground in front of the wheels would have served the compo well.

All the points absolutely deserved. It's great perspective, compo and grainy too.

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  • DAM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 513 W: 67 N: 268] (1110)
  • [2007-01-12 20:08]

I can relate to this so goooood. It just doesn't matter if the road is too bumpy the kids will always fall asleep.

A very tranquil photograph, and innocence is the word here that best describes it. A quiet moment with dad. Nicely done.


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  • Alba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 537 W: 0 N: 206] (2760)
  • [2007-01-19 12:23]

Hi Hans,
Nice sepia tones, nice composition, nice point of view.

Hi Janek,
Humm i like the tone and the background.

Excellent compo and framing, nice sepia tones. Very good.



A beautiful composition filled with harmony and balance! The sybject brings out what your note clarifies! Lovely work!

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1264 W: 44 N: 3160] (18766)
  • [2007-05-11 13:29]

Czesc Janku:)
Nie ma nic nowego to trzeba wracac do archiwum... i dobrze bo masz duzo dobrych fot tutaj.
To w jaki sposob uzyles tu sztuku kadrowania zasluguje na medal... zloty - tak tak - czapki z glow. Sepia robi wrazenie i panuje tu niezwykla sceneria. Wyobrazam sobie jakis film z akcja w czasie lat 40-tych ( nie bierzmy nowoczesnego wozka pod uwage)
- poczatek sceny... kamera odwraca sie i przesuwa, widac wlot innej ulicy... jada Niemcy, matka pospiesznie chwyta za wozek i oddala sie od niebiezpieczenstwa... ok mam za duza wyobraznie to lepiej przestane bo jeszcze jakis scenariusz napisze zamiast krytyki.
Bardzo mnie zachwyciles tym zdjeciem...
Pozdrowienia i serdecznosci, pociechy ze wspanialej corki.

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