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Welcomingly open


Welcomingly open
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Copyright: Mirella Dankova (mirmar) (33)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2016-06-18
Categories: Architecture
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2016-07-08 13:59
Viewed: 799
Points: 2
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I was walking the narrow streets of downtown Budapest when I looked up to see this beautiful building on the corner. I hope I have captured its elegant beauty despite the suggested age and poverty.
Please tell me if the bottom distracts you. I considered cropping the bottom of the picture so the arch is not seen at all.


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  • periko Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 121 W: 44 N: 32] (2223)
  • [2016-07-08 19:46]

Hello Mirella
I like the window and the rustic texture of the wall.
The focusing could have been better, I think, and that wire is a bit annoying.

Kind regards
Pedro

Hi Mirella,
Your idea has come through however I might have excluded the right section of the building and as you mention the bottom arch. I agree the wire is also an unnecessary distraction. You could have also used a flipped perspective and just included the middle section containing the window... just an idea.
erwin...

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