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Copyright: Janusz Fragstein (jan515) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 58 N: 4702] (20934)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-07-15
Categories: Nature
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ30
Exposure: f/4, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-03-13 7:52
Viewed: 1641
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
It was once a stone.
He was hard like a stone.
Either he lay still
in the riverside in the sun
or it became a piece far from
to the tearing waves carried away.
Or he became on a warm day
from chill, crystal-clear
Water softly washes around.

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like the repeating patterns of stones and the slight motion blur. tfs

I like this shot,
A simple subject and with a poetic drive.
The wet and dry stones look eyecatching.

About the motion blur, for water in movement such streams I like more time (also depends on stream speed) but if you keep 1/2 second for example, instead of 1/125 and the result can be outstanding.

Of course, you need a tripod for doing that, and I guess this was not the case, so never mind hahaha :)


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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 897 W: 0 N: 1845] (8705)
  • [2010-03-13 22:27]

Witaj Janusz,
What interesting pictures.
Excellent POV and colors chosen with more first class, congratulations.
A grand sight which urges you to meditation.
Have a great Sunday,

Ciao Janusz

A simple shot, more beautiful,
You chose a very well create this angle
good depth and perspective.
Colors are soft and attractive.
I like the movement of water through the rocks.



Witaj Janusz
Bardzo ciekawa prezentacja,swietny kontrast pomiedzy woda a kamieniami,super detale i doskonale swiatlo.

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