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Gears in art


Gears in art
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Copyright: Britta Doell (Briddl) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 234 W: 69 N: 224] (938)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-01-26
Categories: Artwork
Camera: OLYMPUS E410, Olympus DIGITAL 17.5-45mm
Map: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-01-28 5:25
Viewed: 1439
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a close up on a very special piece of art I found on a trip through Horneburg in northern Germany. The artist put it in his garden. As he was present when I was there on my way by, he showed me around an I saw many more interesting things in his garden and behind his house. Whatever he finds - screws, horse shoes, gears - he makes a piece of art out of it. He showed me several collections of clocks, cameras... The gears I show you here belong to a sculpture of an unbelievable size. I thought this interesting enough to show it here.
Post processing: cropped the image and lightened it up

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Hello Britta,

I like the composition a lot - it offers a lot of possibilities. A bit of advice: with such a topic, it's always good to concentrate on a focal point somewhere in the photo. This photo is missing a bit of focus (and sharpness). The lighting is good.
I may go for a bigger crop, to remove distracting points and emphasize the focal point of the image.

Hope my advice helped a bit :]

Kind greetz,

Natalia

PS: Keep on shooting! Hope to see more of you.

Hi Britta,
First of all welcome to treklens you will really enjoy at this place.
Great mechanism in this shot,
Nice note and tittle also,
TFS...

welcome to tl

Hi dear Britta
Excellent comosition and illuminiscence. Great grey tones and shine, supplemetn with this red motives. TFS
Best regards
Melany

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2505 W: 368 N: 2626] (11966)
  • [2008-06-08 7:21]

I like the compo you used here, Britta - even though it doesn't reveal the size of the work, but then it would be an entirely different shot.
Exposure and reflections are well handled, there's some excellent details to be spotted - like the rust on the big wheel, which is covered with paint but makes some "blobs" appear...
TFS

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