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La maison du 6

La maison du 6
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Copyright: daisy daisy (daisydaisy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 111 N: 1055] (5943)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2015-08
Camera: Sony alpha 230
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-11-10 8:15
Viewed: 1306
Points: 14
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Iso : 100
Temps d'exposition : 1/60 sec
Ouverture du diaphragme : f/8

I have a period of "photographic dryness" ... it may be the season of autumn and winter approaching that does not motivate me enough in photography.

But it's an extraordinary season for writing and observation.

So, I share a picture of this summer, a closed house, which appeared to me to keep secrets from the past, there was a time when people, children, family meals had to fill the walls of this house ... the house at number 6.

I have chosen the sepia and the grain for the atmosphere.
(If you don't like sepia and grain ... too bad)

You can see the original in ws before pp work.

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Hello Daisy! Fine take, nice composition. Marvelous colours. Good contrast and sharpness. Regards!

Hi daisy

Rather than sepia, the photo has an old film feel to it. And I like it. Although the lighting doesn't look the best, the image isn't flat. The house has an abandoned feel with many stories to tell.

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  • Fidy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 112 W: 0 N: 79] (606)
  • [2015-11-10 13:08]

Très pagnol bravo

Hi Daisy,
I do like the sepia choice, it creates the "old and deserted place" feel. The items or pieces of items seemed to have been just dumped in front of the house, fortunately we still see some life in the form of some flowers and plants. Well seen and a interesting presentation.

Bonjour Daisy,
Ce sombre tableau me donne un sentiment de tristesse et d'amertume.
Très bien fait.

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  • Reflex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 639 W: 205 N: 43] (1347)
  • [2015-12-10 11:30]

Une très belle photo pleine de vie, un peu dormante sans doute, mais ça doit être dû à la saison ! :)

Good pov and nicely composed with artistic interpretation as always. Merry Christmas

  • x-ray Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor [C: 38 W: 69 N: 3] (163)
  • [2016-02-05 14:38]

Hi Daisy
Not sure if this yellowish tint works, the greens of the tree have lost their colour, if your intention was for sepia why not convert to B+W and add the tone at this point. The red flowers could be popped and still remain coloured. This shot reminds me of old Ferrania slide film, yes I am old enough to have used it.
Sorry doesn't work for me but this is only my opinion.

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