|Copyright: RDM TKL (RD66)
|Date Taken: 2012-09-16|
|Camera: Nikon D300, 18-55 f/3.5-5.6|
|Exposure: f/3.5, 1/250 seconds|
|Photo Version: Original Version|
|Date Submitted: 2014-02-10 20:39|
|[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note|
|Los d'une promenade dans le parc de Sceaux, dans les Hauts de Seine.|
Well done for experimenting with depth of field, but in my opinion, this shallow DOF doesn't work. I look to the background, it doesn't hold my attention so I look back at the flowers. I've held a sheet of paper to cover the flower on the left and I think the photo works better without it. The flower on the right has a blurred fountain coming out of the top of it, and that doesn't work either. I also think the white flowers are slightly overexposed.
Sorry, just my opinion.