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Copyright: daisy daisy (daisydaisy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 111 N: 1055] (5943)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2013-05-04
Camera: Sony alpha 230, Sony 18-55
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2013-05-04 2:26
Viewed: 1147
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Iso : 100
Temps d'exposition : 1/250 sec
Ouverture du diaphragme : f/13

Mode automatique - direct sunlight

This morning, a great sunlight, my favorite direct sunlight in my garden.

I decided to try experimenting with Mr. Egg, in high key with direct sunlight and flash ..... but it was a disaster.

So I wanted to play with transparency and not the shadows, I wanted a white on white.
I used a white object that is used to cook eggs in the microwave, a white page.

I removed the strong shadows and also I removed a OE point on the egg.
I slightly increased the color of the egg and increased light.

I like the result and that is why I show you.

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An interesting POV and beautiful colours very net and distinguish as always and indeed lights and details are great well done DAISY DAISY

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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2013-05-04 4:27]

Hi Daisy.

I do like what you set out to do and have had to adapt to achieve this result, I like the clean look and clarified lines with the white on white.

stv ;o))

Hi,superb piece of modern art!Friendly regards,Otto.

Hi Daisy
fine handling of light for this artistic image. well focused. Fine PP work. excellent contrast of colors and clear textures.

Awesome composition! I like the washout look. I think the shadow made the photo more 3-dimensional. Great lighting and dof with nice details. Well done, tfs.

Hi Daisy,
Stunner. I love the clarity of the photo and its fine details. The creative abstract composition with the perfect lighting is great. That egg really came out fresh. Did you add a white BG in your PP? there are a few odd edges around the egg holder.

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  • knle Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 31 W: 8 N: 2] (2)
  • [2013-05-04 12:11]

Hi Daisy
This is great. Love the colour and details of the egg, and the shadow is excellent. Positioning within the frame is perfect. Really really good!!

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  • Reflex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 639 W: 205 N: 43] (1347)
  • [2013-05-04 12:30]

Bonjour Daisy,
C'est d'une douceur infinie, avec des tons que l'on croirait sortis d'un tableau de Morandi. Le jeu de lumière rend l'atmosphère encore plus légère, comme si l'oeuf était en lévitation. Superbe réalisation !
Et puis, suis très heureux de voir le retour de Mr Egg!

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  • VicZik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 528 W: 82 N: 950] (4812)
  • [2013-05-04 23:15]

I always enjoy your simple but elegant and artistic work. This is no difference.

Well done

My favorite food/subject, well setup and composed photo Daisy, good job..


Hi Daisy,
A simple yet favorable result with intense spotted details on the egg shell. Artistic touch and well composed. So many options with photography.

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