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Copyright: daisy daisy (daisydaisy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1517 W: 111 N: 1055] (5868)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-10
Categories: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2012-11-05 11:24
Viewed: 1321
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
SONY DSLR A 230
Iso : 100
Temps d'exposition : 1/125 sec
Ouverture du diaphragme : f/9
Distance focale : 55.00

Mode manuel - Natural light

Fallen leaves in October .... the last beauty.
Rain, cold, autumn, colors change.
The end of a season is beautiful, whatever the weather, must want to see, want to believe, want to love.

ppwork : contrast, levels, noise, saturation, etc.

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I'm not a huge fan of heavily processed work, but when done well (and this is) then I could change my mind.

All of your work is very artistic. You could have chosen a bright yellow or red, but I like the choice of a duller colour, I think it works very well. The prominent veins of the leaf are very dramatic (and are my favourite feature), the processed water droplets add contrast and interest. I also like the overall grainy texture which is in keeping with the overall appearance.

Another imaginative and well developed photo. Fallen, but not forgotten. Keep it up.

Love the focus you have achieved on these well formed water droplets, Daisy!
Great sharpness and well maintained contrasts through your nice PP skills.
As Robert already mentioned, I do agree with him that the grainy look adds to the overall appeal of the shot.

Just a minor issue: I might have cropped the picture a bit from the top.

Have a nice evening!

Mercí,
Paras

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  • VicZik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 528 W: 82 N: 950] (4812)
  • [2012-11-05 11:57]

I love the rain drops daisy...They are like diamond and I do like the picture, The top gives color contrast... Well done & TFS
Best
Vic

Très intéressant, Daisy, ce post-traitement pour cette nature morte. Ton travail sur les contrastes et les niveaux met bien en exergue le sentiment automnal de la vie qui s'en va. Et avec le bruit ajouté, même les gouttes d'eau prennent un coup de vieux! Bref, un post-traitement approprié et bien dosé.
Merci du partage & amicalement,
Erik

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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2012-11-05 15:14]

Hi Daisy.

Its as if a bag of jewels has fallen....amazed at the effect to the textures. tfs

stv ;o))

Olá Daisy
Bien joli cette composition. J+ aime les textures at tonalitées, tu as trouvés des " diamands"
um abraço
teresa

Bonjour Daisy
Une petite merveille que cette photographie
superbe post traitement...ces petites gouttelettes
sont géniales sur cette feuille aux tons de brun et d'ocre
du beau travail et bien présentée
Amitié
Robert :-)

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  • brech Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 539 W: 135 N: 1111] (3045)
  • [2012-11-05 19:55]

Daisy,

You have accomplished an image that almost appears like a painting with the texture of the leaves and the drops of water. You macro images has many interestings elements that creates a wonderful composition.

LAB

Hi Daisy, I always admire your creativity - the droplets are beautiful and shimmering and catch the eye - while the darker colors enhance the prsentation.
kindest reggards Monika I like your note.

I like the PP work a lot. IT looks like a painting with the sharp contrasts. Well done, as always
Trudy

Hi daisy
wise PP work for this artistic presentation. marvelous deep colors. great capture of droplets that feel like precious stones. sharp and impressive image.
shalom
tsilla

Hello Daisy

Here is a very artistic result of your vision. I like it very much. Very good work and full of appealing water droplets that bring about harmony in your art. nice

jimmy

I love these little crystal drops! Beautiful light here Daisy! Nice close crop, excellent sharpness on this leaf!
B-)
Linda

Beautiful! So simple yet so powerful a composition. Good use of backlighting to bring out those water droplets. Very well done, tfs.

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