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about baldness ?

about  baldness ?
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Copyright: Christine COLLOMB (CMJC) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 154 W: 193 N: 124] (1191)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2011-01-29
Categories: Humorous, Artwork
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2011-02-03 13:04
Viewed: 1584
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Lyon city make a public event on a place but what about? baldness?
the young boy with her cap must be carreful!

no it was about air pollution and the white balls are here as symbol from pure air
in WS you have a larger view from the place...

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Bonjour Christine,

J’aime bien le cadrage serré et le POV. Le choix du B&W est très bien choisi pour mettre l’accent sur les ballons blanc qui sont une couleur pure. Bravo !

Au plaisir,


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  • Tezza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 213 W: 97 N: 368] (3380)
  • [2011-02-03 20:00]

I really like this shot but I think it would be much stronger without the top of the head in the foreground. The focus would then be more on the young boy and his balding, older look alike. The two are in synch. - the other distracts.
Apart fom this I think this is a clever shot.

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