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minimalistic landscape


minimalistic landscape
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Copyright: Jean Christophe Jacques (jonathanhart) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 282 N: 1568] (17012)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04-30
Categories: Nature, Experimental
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): >my green stars, >my "fields" photos, .Field-o-graphy / Graphismes Champêtres, >my countryside photos, >the lonely tree exercise [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-05-01 1:34
Viewed: 1645
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 47
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
minimalistic landscape: take the long view!
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To AKF: Ade !jonathanhart 1 05-08 15:16
To sudipparbat: sharpnessjonathanhart 1 05-01 06:23
To sudipparbat: the sky wasn't interesting, it's far betterjonathanhart 1 05-01 06:21
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Beautiful Colors.Very nice composition.Regards.

The pov is great and even the tree is very sharp.
Good vibrant green/ yellow colours.

Regards,

Thomas.

Bonjour Jean Christophe.
La saison des colzas donne de splendides plans graphique à immortaliser dans les champs et tu sais en excelle dans ce domaine.
J’aime bien ces contrastes opposées et forte, Bravo pour cette maîtrise.

J'aurai éventuelement mis un tout petit filet noir entre le cadre et l'image pour ne pas noyer le blanc du ciel dans le blanc du cadre.
Bonne journée
Urs

The two layers of foreground is marvelous, toning is cool, colors and its sharpness is great composition of the tree is on its point it should be, but what about the sky??? where are its colors or does it need at least blue?

Abid Changazi

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2009-05-01 1:57]

Hello Jean,
Lovely vivid colors with a solo tree composition!
It's pleasing and very delicate!
Great job. Regards.

Francis Xavier

hello Jean C.!
three colors, two lines and one plant
minimalistic and beautiful visual

ciao sERGIO

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  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 593 W: 3 N: 545] (3785)
  • [2009-05-01 2:12]

Hello Jean Christophe,
excellent composition. Simple but stunning. My favourite of yours I think.
Well seen,
Bev

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2009-05-01 3:10]

Salut Jean Christophe

I would add a secondary inner black border line, around the white sky, to separate it from the rest of the white border. The image itself is wonderful. Nothing to fault. Tfs! Bon weekend!

Hello Jean Christophe!
Another fantastic picturewhit green-yellow field and a lonely tree!
Nice white background!
Excellent work!
Best regards!
Lili

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 710 W: 2 N: 153] (4208)
  • [2009-05-01 3:30]

nice and colorful
good composition
nice to see

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1250 W: 106 N: 2911] (22323)
  • [2009-05-01 4:17]

Hi Jean,
Very nice ! Well composed and very simplistic. Love the contrast in this. TFS Julie

hi jean
i guess these arent the original colors...
the photo has been burned, the sky and the tree is the proof and saturation increased, with an increase in sharpness. Cud have done something with the stark sky...
looks great though, TFS.

Love this minimalist approach JC. Just a great shot and great PP work. Great job
Trudy

Ciao Jean



Well .. Well ... Well.
My colors super favorite
carpet in this beautiful landscape!
A beautiful visual of colors and details.
The tree alone to observe all the beauty.
Beautiful look and great taste!
Greetings,

Sergio

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 520 W: 26 N: 1877] (12221)
  • [2009-05-01 8:20]

Hello Jean,

I love this!
So simple....and sò wonderful!
Great colors, pov and composition.
Well done!

TFS and greetings from Netherlands,
Adri

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2009-05-01 9:32]

Hello,

Merveilleus image, merveilleu jeu de couleur entre le vert et le jaune, avec ce solitaire, gransiose.

bravo et amitié

Nicou

Alors là... Je dis : Monsieur JC
BRAVO, c'est du grand art.
J'admire

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 323 W: 2 N: 143] (4456)
  • [2009-05-01 14:25]

Hi Jean, great pp work, you have obtained a strong abstract effect that I like.
Compliments! Ciao, cinzia

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665)
  • [2009-05-02 9:06]

hi Jean

3 colors and you are able to present such a fine graphic reality of the field! Very well captured POV and effective composition to create a visual from the lines dividing zones of color. I wont mind the washed out white sky.

Very thoughtful to place the tree in such a striking position!

tfs, bill

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  • CMJC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 154 W: 193 N: 124] (1191)
  • [2009-05-03 12:32]

une de mes préférées dans tous les champs où j'adore me promener grâce à toi!
minimaliste certes mais avec en plus une composition perfectioniste!

Hi Jo :)

Your spring-field-compositions are amazing, I like their graphic and geometrical effects. Good job!

Iza

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  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1121 W: 2 N: 877] (11866)
  • [2009-05-05 14:01]

That´s original, that´s beautiful!
As Brazilian I did enjoy it very much!
Colors of my country, good feeling, Jean!
Merci Beaucoup.
Amicalement,
Nivaldo

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  • limba3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1035 W: 476 N: 576] (16751)
  • [2009-05-06 15:00]

Hi Jean
Wonderful colors, composition, lighting and point of view.
Regards
Anna

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  • AKF Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 156 W: 12 N: 62] (421)
  • [2009-05-08 14:03]
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It's nice to finally know your name! Though Jonathan worked just fine for me ;)
It's a pleasant surprise to come back and see what a beautiful turn your photographs have taken. I love this minimalist shot, the composition, the colors, the cropping are perfect. The line trough the green and yellow is key here. Congratulations old friend!!!

Failte Jean!

great french landscapes you have here!

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