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Copyright: Jean Christophe Jacques (jonathanhart) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 282 N: 1568] (17012)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-03
Categories: Artwork, Experimental, Macro, Abstract
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/10 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): >my other macros, >my graphic &/or abstract photos, >my colored papers [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-01-04 6:28
Viewed: 1914
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
after the intriguing first version...

PP contrast & crop
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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 981 W: 61 N: 169] (29412)
  • [2009-01-04 6:33]

Un bel effet certain JC. Un peu plus de luminosité aurait donné davantage d'éclat, je pense. Ce détail ne m'empêche aucunement d'apprécier ton prsent travail cependant.

Iso.

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  • karl Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 163 W: 66 N: 62] (986)
  • [2009-01-04 6:34]

I like very much this composition, woundn't say more than your first b&w composition, but I may say they are both them perfecc examples by it's own, this one being by the colours and texture and the other by the texture and deep of the image

Hello Jean Christophe,your shots are becoming ever more abstract;this is a lovely composition.The stripes of colour look good side by side with the geometrical shapes.I would love to know the location for this shot.
Tfs, regards Jean.

A very intriguing abstract and wonderful colour..

Nice photo..

DAvid

wonderful compositin of colors.

Bom dia Jean,
Egalement beau!
Amitiés,
Raimundo

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 818 W: 84 N: 1189] (10601)
  • [2009-01-04 7:33]

very good abstract :D excellent experimental shot :D

Yan

Yes ! Celle-ci j'aime :o)
Des lignes, des ombres, et de la couleur !!!!

Merci :o)
Bises, Marylou

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  • tribord Gold Star Critiquer [C: 85 W: 91 N: 296] (895)
  • [2009-01-04 7:53]
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Bonjour Jean-Christophe,

Plutôt psychédélique cette photo de champs...
Ah? euh? Ah bon, ce ne sont pas des champs mais des feuilles de papier? Autant pour moi...
Sérieusement, voilà un très bon binôme avec la version noir et blanc.
Ce qui m'intrigue ici, c'est comment tu as fait pour obtenir l'effet de flou. As-tu posé un tas de feuilles sur une table et les autres sur le sol?
Comment t'est venue cette idée?
Y aura-t-il un numéro trois à la série avec une grande spirale prise en contre-plongée?
Je me demande enfin ce que cela donnerait si tu élargissais l'espace entre les feuilles au fur et à mesure...

Au plaisir,

Damien.

Hi Jean,
your serie with the paper is very nice - I like the forms and the colours here, abstract - realy pretty to look at.
Thanks and greetings
Sabine - wishnugaruda

great idea, brilliant composition, very well done. (wish I'd done it :) Janos

Very nice. Good capture of the progressive colours, two different geometric concepts.
Rew

salut JC,

tiens, je t'ai trouvé ! (lol).
Superbes couleurs, c'est simple, et bien réalisé.
Bonne soirée
Marie

It's always things "in our face" that pass unseen, and it takes a well-trained and inspired eye to scan for and catch such images! Superb composition showing this rainbow of colored paper!
Compliments,
Diana

J'adore !!!
Bonne idée. c'est vrai que ces bloc notes multicolores sont source de bonnes photos.
J'aime beaucoup cette version.

ciao Jean,

A very colorful abstact image. It's wonderful that we can be so creative in this digital photography.

By the way, we "watch" movie (or filme) and "look at" photos in english . . . just thought you might be interested in a little english lesson. :O) I certainly understand "usage" issue as I continue to attempt to learn Italiano.

Keep shootin'

Richard

Hello Jean,
very graphic - superb idea,
Regards Caesar

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