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Inner Spirit

Inner Spirit
Photo Information
Copyright: HARDOUIN JUDE (jude) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 51 W: 1 N: 10] (447)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-12-19
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Canon Powershot A75, Canon Built in Lens, JPEG 200 ISO
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/10 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-01-01 8:27
Viewed: 2071
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I promised you some more of the 'Charming'model Alyssa. Here we go.;-)
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I like the heavy use of red in this photo; it makes the photo more attractive...


very nice color---good look on models face :)

Excellent pose, good use of light, all tones are brownish except for the lips, giving a sensual touch

I like this one, this is very effective. Usually the distortion coming from short distance and wide lens are not good for portraits, but this seems to be an exception :-) Her lips are exposed in foreground and this is a good idea too.

THere is one thing I'm thinking of. I really don't know if it's wrong but I'm not sure the overexposed part fits this photo. I don't see any relation to other elements and find no reason for this. Have the impression it stands out of delicate tones of the rest of photo.... (?) This is not a rebuke, just thinking :-)

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  • Fakir Silver Star Critiquer [C: 24 W: 2 N: 2] (162)
  • [2005-01-03 6:19]
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Really charming. Inner spirit - of course - this is what tigers like most.

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  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1314 W: 11 N: 29] (66)
  • [2005-01-08 8:04]
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A very good light in this portrait-picture, nice model you have here !

Great light man!
It is pretty good, really. and you have cleared up the face very nicely. But I think the most important catchy thing here are the eyes. serious and indifferent, yet there is something about them

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