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Night Time


Night Time
Photo Information
Copyright: Joni Jarvinen (jorbe) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 1] (291)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-25
Categories: Artwork, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed], Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-27 6:05
Viewed: 2252
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
One of my more artistic portraits.
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hello Joni
very interesting artwork
great colors and light
regadrs
T

very good effect
good work
Sabina

Ahh, I think this type of shot is extremely difficult to critique.
It's definitely very artistic and it's well done too! Good blending. Everything is within same tonal range and fits well together. I just don't have anything to say about the message you are trying to deliver.
I understand the moon and clock and can relate it to night time but I don't really see too much night time in the girl or the ripples.

From an technical point of view I think this is very well done. I like the tones and I really like the texture you laid on it.
I think it's well done!

Cheers,
Jens

Hello Joni.

Very nice composition and great PP work. I am adding this one to favs! :-)

TFS!

Sincerely,
David

i love it! i think you did well on the textures and colors. well done Joni. keep it up!

i a n

I like it.
Rew

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2441 W: 250 N: 873] (8693)
  • [2008-10-27 18:58]

Another nice artwork very well composed and kind of surreal.I like your creativity.This photo expresses a lot of emotions and is very atrractive.Great model.TFS
Michel

Hi Joni,
Nice abstract photo!! Good composition and the mood is so great. I like the small details that are transparent on the girl's skin.
TFS,
Phavin

Hi Joni
You are very quickly overcome technical processing photos..
fantastic job my friends.
greeting
JozefK

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  • Ramdan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 688 W: 31 N: 1408] (5765)
  • [2008-10-30 18:30]

I like it, Joni. I like it very much.

The color scheme is strong. It works very well with the expression of the model. Elements and detail on background is well chosen and placed, except the ripple effect. But, this is just a matter of personal taste and preference, Joni. I believe that you have your own reason putting it there.

Artistically very strong. Very well done.

Ramdan.

Hey Joni!
I've taken a look over your photographs, and I must say that the post-processing effect here; the dark, sinister, atmosphere works well in your advantage, creating a unique look into a different world.

On a technical note, I think that while the model, the moon and the birds work well to create the composition. I'm not entirely sure about the inclusion of the swirls or the clock was necessary. At least, I don't think they necessairly create a better cohesion of the composition.

Alas a wonderful job, cheers

I love porraits. Excellent creative art. Nice composition.

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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2010-03-18 14:30]

Hi Joni,

Very good PP work, beautiful colors and subject.
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

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