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Copyright: Maged Mohamed (Maged) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 82 W: 9 N: 251] (2656)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04-25
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Mood, Portrait
Exposure: f/5.2, 1/130 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-04-28 5:26
Viewed: 2787
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This girl was the waitress in the Cafeteria where i was sitting , some coffee was fall down while the customers were sitting and here how her expression ..

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Hi Maged,
Good portrait . The hair on her head is a little bit over exposed but I like the expression in her face and the composition of this horizontal portrait because you left more space in front of the subject.
I like the background in the shadow and the DOF is perfect for this kind of shot .

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  • Tezza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 213 W: 97 N: 368] (3380)
  • [2009-04-28 6:00]

Nicely captured moment. The narrow DOF adds impact to this well presented and well lit shot.

Hello Maged,

I like how the light is playing such an important part in this portrait, like a spotlight on her hair and face!
A lovely, pensive moment!
The dof, with the sharp image against the blurred b/g, is excellent!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Beautiful portrait .
Very nice colors light and moment.
Regards Zoran

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