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Copyright: Michael Dolby (mrmike1935) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 213] (4654)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-01-01
Categories: Humorous
Camera: Leica V-Lux 4, DC Vario-Elmarit 1:2.8-3.3/6-72 ASPH, Digital
Exposure: f/4.1, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2012-01-02 6:28
Viewed: 1015
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Maybe Cinderella did exist?,
at least this Glass Slipper in the Window of a Local Hairdresser would sugest it.
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To atomas59: Escapedmrmike1935 1 01-03 07:19
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Tho I like the idea, the problem is that, there is no magic that comes out of this shot. When I first opened it, just by the title I couldn't figure it out, look like a piece of ice melting on a pellow. Then when I read your note..I finally found the slipper. Composition is not that good, seems that you wanted to include the decoration on the side of the pillow, the angle you've choosen don't seem to work eigher, too low, too much importance occupied by the pillow..once again, getting higher and presenting the slipper more side way, would have work better. You need more depth of field, shinny object have tendacy to appear mushy, even with greater depth. Contrast is too low, if you won't transparent object to come out of the picture, a darker background helps. The shoe seem too central, cause of the heel top part, that make it look higher, giving more space infront of the point of the shoe, would have help too.))))

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