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M and the staircase

M and the staircase
Photo Information
Copyright: Ilfumo Uccide (marcocig) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 464 W: 50 N: 79] (3719)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-08
Categories: Mood
Camera: Canon PowerShot S30
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/100 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-04-12 8:40
Viewed: 2379
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A shot taken "accidentally" in a tower of an ancient hotel...
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it is too bad her face is a little blurry because the idea is a great one! Really like the POV and composition. The blur isn't that bad so I don't mean to sound too critical. Nice photo and welcome to TL!. Also, I would look nice to not cut off the top of the head since that is the main focus of the photo. Just my opinion though! JP

Hi Marco,

Hmmm interesting. Would have been better if sharper but still, the composition with the head back and the stair makes it work. Would definitely be worth to work on the idea.

Have a nice day.


Hello Marco,
Really beautiful picture!
This view is unusal but worked great here.. Composition is great, lighting is great but I think there is a little problem with DOF..
If I were, I would focus on the face and would not use f/5 but use f/11 or 13.. But sure it is personal, this one looks also good..

It adds the game based on geometry with the depth of meaning.

Probablu the fact that it's a casual shot mekes it even better.

On the other side photography is the miracle for which you find the magic in the shots where you did not expect it. Isn't it?

Oh, Marco, thanks for reminding me of those ridiculous staircases in the CR! I really like this accidental capture - great post.


  • Great 
  • BAKO Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 71 W: 11 N: 8] (748)
  • [2005-06-28 16:01]

Hi Marco,
Blurry is not important :)
this is really great


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