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view from my window
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Copyright: Matej Zmiric (M4tej) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 212 W: 28 N: 82] (781)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-04-27
Categories: Nature, Nocturnal
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): View of my balcony/window, Fav. photos [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-04-30 14:39
Viewed: 2143
Points: 40
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is my first photo. The picture is taken from my window. My mother help me to do resise and upload.
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  • Maru Gold Star Critiquer [C: 471 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-04-30 14:52]
  • [3] [+]

Hi Matej,
great view from your window with such beautiful sky and those city lights playing in the streets!! Very nice mood :)
Well done.. and welcome to TL you too ;-)
Marisa

Finally Matej, your first photo, welcome to TL!
Unlike alagoa, I will give you your first smiley immediately, because we need to courage you to play with your camera.
I see you are trying to capture the warm colors of the sky at your place. I am VERY familiar with those colors, and they can be very beautiful. But first of all, you need to decide what's your object on the picture, are those the buildings with smooth lights, or is it the sky with such lovely colors. Well, your mom can be very helpful about those questions, she did a great job with those houses and sky.
Anyway, I am very looking forward to see your upcoming pictures. Keep up the good work and once again welcome to TL.

Bravo Matej, dobro došao na TL! Fotka nije loša ali u stvari čekam tvoje sljedeće fotke da vidim koliko se voliš igrati sa foto aparatom. Plus, moj Filip kaže da sad ima nekoga "svojih" godina s kim se može natjecati :))))
Samo ti nastavi slati fotke ovdje i ne srami se pitati roditelje svaku sitnicu vezanu uz fotografiju. Sretno!

Hello Matej!!! Well with such talented parents I guess that we could expect no less from you!!!!
What a fantastic first entry Matej!! What a beautiful night photo. I am a fan of these shots and let me tell you that yours has some of the most fantastic colours I've seen!! It's definitely one that I want to remember in the future, so I'm going to add it to my theme list ;-))
Your well deserved smiley will arrive tomorrow, ok??
Congratulations Matej. You are very talented!
Ana

Welcome to TrekLens, Matej. This is a very nice first photo. I see you were interested in taking the view from your window, and I can see why. It is a good night view with a good composition. I like the warm colours created by the street lamps. That night sky is very dramatic. Overall, this is a really GREAT night shot. Very well done for your first try. Looking forward to seeing your next shot. Keep up the good work Matej.

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  • Fisher Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 331 N: 902] (5752)
  • [2005-05-01 9:52]
  • [3] [+]

Nothing wrong with this pic, Matej.
Honestly, you did very well with this composition. The sky is a bonus to the aready warm colors of the buildings. You have an eye for photography.

Read magazines on photography, eventually you'll find a comfort zone, people, buildings, wildlife, lanscape or nature. Once you find the zone, read magazines on that area look at other's work and you'll soon be on your way and will find ways in creativity.

First and foremost before your zone though, Photography 101, know what it is you are doing, don't rely on post processing or computers to do the work for you. You do the work and post pro will be easy and will not take alot of your valuable time.
As Donald Trump says, "Time is money." :) :)

EXCELENT WORK big guy.!!!!!!!!!!!!
Welcome to Trek L.

Mike
P.S. my zone is wildlife/nature/landscape

Hi Matej !!
Beautiful night shot with a great sky ...
How lucky you are to have such a beautiful view from your window !
Well done and welcome to TL !!!
Sylvie

mmhhhh..... I recognised something knewn in thumb.... some family's air..... ;-)))
about this picture are you sure this is your first photo? because I'm not so sure.... it seems a picture done by an expert..... the colours are so well balanced, as the dark and light zones....
may be you have to go out your room to take better landscapes... but as firt photo (if it is ;-))) ) is very good.
welcome on TL
Paolo

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  • edie Gold Star Critiquer [C: 659 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-05-01 14:09]
  • [2] [+]

Compliments Matej, you have a very good look for photography and this one is perfect in every detail,overall I love a such amazing clouded sky.
If you start in this way I think your will go so far....
Welcome on Tl.
Edie

And a very good shot it is Matej. Nice contrast between the sky and the streets.
Welcome to TL

Pozdravi mamu i tatu.

Hi matej. The first photograph is most difficult to render comprehensible with people, I look at hold it and I see that you started with a photo very easy step with carried out, (photograph of night). I can say without too misleading me that the success is. You have goods contrates between the various colors, you do not have a stopped zone, it is to be dir completely black. The xposition, the exposure time is ideal. I will request how many photographs to you from you taken to do this one? It is important to make at least three with different openings of them and same speed, personally thus I work. In fact small councils can one day leave the ideal photograph. Cheer for this splendid catch of sight and continues to be also meticulous for your page-setting.
JP
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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2522 W: 368 N: 2626] (11964)
  • [2005-05-02 17:25]

Welcome to TL, Matej. An excellent place to learn a lot, at least I did. And still do!
This is an excellent first post, but frankly, with parent like that I'm not amazed ;o).
I think you have a beautiful view from your room, and you captured it nicely. Good work. TFS (thanks for sharing).

Very nice view Matej! Amazing. I love the different architectures of different countries. These buildings are very unique and not similar to what I have seen on the east coast USA.

Beautiful night view Matej, the lights of the buildings is warm and inviting, and I love the mountains in the background and the lovely evening sky, with the buildings silhouetted against it. Very nice composition. Excellent work.

Hello Matej, it is nice to meet you and I want to welcome you to Treklens. You chose a difficult night shot for your first post and you are to be commended for achieving such a difficult shot so well. It is nice to see your beautiful view from your window with the golden lights so well captured and the night sky visible. Very good first post and looking forward to more now......:O)

Lucky boy, Matej: I'd like to live in a such place! I like your picture also for colors and light, the sky indicates that we are at sunset.

Good work Paolo

Beautiful night photo.
If you start in this way then your photos will improve very fast.. :)

Well done and welcome to TL !!!

Beautiful, applied to WS

Wow!, beautiful night shoot and the sky it's amazing.

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  • Isamar Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 144 W: 0 N: 112] (2354)
  • [2005-09-18 13:59]

What a fabolous view you have from your window!!
Great shot! Congrats
Isa

dobar dan matej!
fantastic photo from you!!
very good

Hej Matej,
Jako lijepa slika, boje pogotovo. Cak bi se i moja kuca mogla pronaci preko puta, u Opatiji.

Veliki pozdrav... Andrea :)

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