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Autoworld Museum - 39


Autoworld Museum - 39
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Copyright: Pierre Langlois (pierrefonds) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 442 W: 3 N: 1323] (4871)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-04-30
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Nikon D300, Nikkor 18-200 3.5-5.6G IF-ED AF-S DX VR, Kenko PRO1 Digital W 72mm
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/50 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2012-04-25 6:38
Viewed: 1349
Points: 6
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Une vue sur une Renault Dauphine qui est en exposition au musée Autoworld à Bruxelles. La photo a été prise à 1142(heure européenne) lors d'une visite du musée.

A view of a Renault Dauphine which is in exposition at the Autoworld museum in Brussels. The photo was taken at 1142(european time) during a visit of the museum.

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Whilst the photo is sharp it appears quite dull. All of your photos of old cars seem to be much from the same angle! Have you considered trying to find different viewpoints? Maybe getting up close? Tilting the camera?

Also there are some bumpers (fenders I imagine to you) sticking into the side of the picture on the left - a bit of thoughtful composition or PP cropping would get rid of those.

To be honest Pierre I would expect far greater things from a D300.

In the interests of learning, sincerely,

DAvid

Ciao Pierre. lovely old car, beautiful colors, splendid clarity and fine details, very well done, my friend, ciao Silvio

Bonjour Pierre,

I have to agree with DAvid on the issue of POV in this picture.

I personally feel that the window in the BG tend to OE in addition to the fact that some frontal parts of the car are visible on the left border of the picture which do decline the overall appeal of the shot.
I might have gone for a closer shot in this case and try to make space for myself in spite of the lesser free space available in the museum :)

Please don't mind openness in this regard.

Mercí,
Paras

Bonsoir Pierre,
Belle prise de vue intérieur sans flash avec une belle netteté de cette Renault Dauphine au musée Autoworld de Bruxelles,
Excellent details de cette voiture et couleurs.
compliments
Michel

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2012-04-25 18:43]

Ciao Pierre

As a record shot this is fine although I would have cropped the bumper bar at left & perhaps the oe window too, before uploading. There are several other minor flaws too. But the diffused lighting works well here & sharpness is good. Tfs!

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