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Neckenmackt 6

Neckenmackt 6
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Copyright: Csaba Lanyi (Clanyi) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 254 W: 7 N: 100] (7129)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2011-05-12
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon EOS 7 D, Tamron AF 28-300mm f/3.5-6.3 Macro, Tiffen 67mm Circular Polarizer
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-05-25 11:17
Viewed: 1432
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Walking around Neckenmackt
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Ok shot but in my opinion it would be better with some space cropped from the top and right, to bring the horizon up to the 1/3rd point for better composition. I also personally would prefer it without the frame effect, in my view it cheapens the shot.

Just my feedback!

olá Csaba
I like the composition and the tonality and the mood.
I d.on´t like the frame but I don´t like frames.
Antway I think the composition very interesting
um abraço

  • loribird Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 920 W: 109 N: 1182] (5561)
  • [2011-05-25 20:52]

Nice shot Csaabi. Lovely presentation. Looks like something from another era. Great tones and detail and great composition. Well done. TFS, Lori

  • Great 
  • Texan Gold Star Critiquer [C: 543 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2011-05-26 9:45]

The sheer rot of the scene and the building about to fall down has a visceral feel.....The black and white treatment was appropriate! The drama of the building about to be overcome and collapse convenced me to give it an extra point

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