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Caribbean paradise

Caribbean paradise
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Copyright: Megan KW (Serabi) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 118 W: 0 N: 19] (1643)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09-26
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D70 Digital SLR, Tamron 28-200AF XR
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-06-20 20:49
Viewed: 6993
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 52
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I haven't posted anything in a while from my Caribean collection. Thought you might like this one...
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To kclai: Thanks for the tips :)Serabi 1 06-21 17:33
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Beautiful landscape, great model, man it looks like you had fun! Thanks for sharing.

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  • poulinp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 160 W: 8 N: 39] (1755)
  • [2006-06-20 21:30]
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Wonderful place and colors. Good saturation too. The girl is maybe too vertically centered, but the picture is beautiful anyway.

Nice photo, she looks helpless, as if she's stranded. Cool mood, the water looks nice. Exposure could be better.

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  • sohado Silver Star Critiquer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 2] (134)
  • [2006-06-20 22:12]
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simple but very nice.

Beautifully constructed photograph. Composition is just right, with the three main parts of the shot, and the diagonal line of the surf separating the scenic element from the portrait element.
(Points to come)

hi megan,
beautiful landscape and colors. it would be better if the model is facing to the sea instead landward for much stronger impact. other than that, it's all good. tfs.

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  • kclai Silver Star Critiquer [C: 45 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-06-21 2:03]
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Hi Megan
I like the PoV of this image, which also provided a good depth here. But I would prefered this image of horizontal instead of vertical.
On the mark of horizontal, the model could be placed at her original placing, but you can includes more space to the right, by providing more view of the three elements.
Cheers and good day, Megan.
Eric Lai

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  • Yacow Gold Star Critiquer [C: 61 W: 0 N: 2] (1798)
  • [2006-06-21 18:47]
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Piekne miejsce, i pieknie pokazane, naturalnie....podoba mi sie, pozdr jaco

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  • andzia Gold Star Critiquer [C: 162 W: 0 N: 0] (991)
  • [2006-06-22 0:20]
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very nice

bonjour MEGAN.
tres jolie composition!
oui c'est le paradis avec cette jolie SIRENE!

Nice view onto a nice beach, and most crystal clean water.

Beautiful posture sitting on the sandy beach.

Well done.

simple and nice captions ;-)

Excellent colors, view and sharp picture! The model is like "breaking the ice" sort of.. It would have been nicer to see her face.. but it's just my opinion.. overall great!

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1350 W: 102 N: 1081] (9125)
  • [2007-12-10 17:59]

Hi Megan, This is well titled, it looks a superb place to visit. Photo is simple and well composed. Would be good to see the face also. TFS. Murray.

Perfect composition

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 0 N: 1852] (14495)
  • [2008-02-04 10:24]

Amazing good mood here,wonderful Megan.

Paradise best shared... looks wonderful! :) ;)

Hope you had some good company in the Caribean...? :)

Nice pic. :) TFS Francis


composición nitidez y un gran panorama te felicito

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  • soe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 381 W: 0 N: 108] (2473)
  • [2008-12-04 22:42]

Hi Megan
Beautiful landscape and colors. very nice.

Tin Soe

It is gr8 so see lovely beach pics....

Nice seascape,
Very good colors .!

Hi Megan!!!
Yes this one is a piece of this paradise!!
Nice colors and light, the sun stays with us for this day. Thanks.
Best regards! Carine

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 710 W: 2 N: 153] (4208)
  • [2009-05-05 0:53]

nice shot
good pov
well done

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  • hama Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 182 W: 0 N: 74] (1454)
  • [2009-09-10 12:12]

Megan KW,

Very beautifully managed shot. The Composition is very pleasentwhile describing the three main parts of the shot, creating a diagonal line of the surf is incresing the beauy of the photogrph.The fixing of the lady right in the centre is making the shot more eye catching.


Hi Megan,

Wonderful land scape with very well equation of aperture and shutter speed.

very nicely done and brilliant work.


  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2012-04-04 15:55]

Boa noite Megan,

Great POV to make this excellent shot.
Marvelous colors and excellent contrast/sharpness.


wonderful. beautiful, peaceful

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  • leeno Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 41] (725)
  • [2013-11-13 4:53]

The layers of colour are very distinctive, the beach, the sea, the sky and the model. Well done


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