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Copyright: Megan KW (Serabi) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 118 W: 0 N: 19] (1643)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-03-01
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D70 Digital SLR, Tamron 28-200AF XR
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-12-28 21:32
Viewed: 4029
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My friend Peggy. Beautiful as always :)
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Cette photo est très belle, vous avez bien su capter un moment magique dans les yeux de cette jeune fille. Bien réalisée, bravo.
This photo is very beautiful, you knew how to well get a magic moment in the eyes of this girl. Realized well, bravo.

Classic and magic,
Clear and beautiful...like her eyes...

Nice portrait, beautiful eyes. Well captured. TFS


Tu amiga es realmente muy bella, sus ojos se muy hermosos.
Tu retrato esta muy bien, la expresión de sus ojos quedo muy bien y la profundidad de campo muy bien realizada.
Felicitaciones Megan.
Feliz año nuevo.

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  • DAM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 513 W: 67 N: 268] (1110)
  • [2007-01-21 13:06]
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Too bad the other girl is behind her. Other wise your photo would have been perfect. Try softening her skin a bit more with a free little program called NEAT IMAGE. Just google it and voila.
Beach photography tends to be tricky... too much sun, oily skin from the sun blocker etc. This program will help you a bit.

Your DOF was good. Were you using manual or auto.

Megan, the title here really takes away from your subject... we know this is your photo. No really a need to let us know.

Uh.. did I say she has killer eyes?


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  • james Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 148 W: 2 N: 91] (392)
  • [2007-02-11 12:28]

you have a really good photo here. You have the subject clearly stated and good details with the subject.
if you wanted to detract the person behind without removing completlt, you could do a b&w background and your subject in color. I do that if one or the other subject is a bit blurry, tends to draw them out of the scene.
I use one program to do this, but recently found a free one called piccasa picasso something like that its mentioned alot on here, anyway, on of the tools in it lets you choose an area size and keep it in color while everything else is converted to b&w.
might want to check into it.

Beautiful portrait Megan, great skin tones and detail. Peggy has beautiful eyes.
Regards Mark

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  • quang (237)
  • [2007-06-22 7:43]

Simply Beautiful! Beautiful shot! Beautiful girl! :)
I really like her eyes, great look, they are really intense


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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 788 W: 52 N: 418] (10434)
  • [2007-07-05 13:47]

Hi Megan. beatiful composition. i like the focus highlighting
Peggy and the DOF made more drama.
nice sharpness and tones. well presented. Tfs


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  • MeAT Silver Star Critiquer [C: 14 W: 7 N: 2] (34)
  • [2007-11-21 21:28]

I think this is a very flattering portrait of your friend. Well done.

MeAT :)

  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2008-11-07 15:22]

Hello Megan,

Your friend is a pretty girl and the portrait is excellent with beautiful and natural colors.
Very good frame!

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