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Danaus plexippus # 1


Danaus plexippus # 1
Photo Information
Copyright: Eric Nguyen (globe-trotteur) (337)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2014-07-12
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2014-09-13 10:56
Viewed: 1151
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Monarch butterfly in a public garden along the beach.

Papillon monarque dans un jardin public sur le front de mer.
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Bonjour Eric,
Un point focal magnifique et une superbe profondité.
De mon goût personnel je ferait une decoupage autour de la partie central.
Je vous offre un WS pour illustrer ce que je dis.
R.

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 790 W: 26 N: 808] (9654)
  • [2014-09-13 14:04]

Hi Eric,
Good focus and DoF, I like the colouful BG
Cheers
Jack

Hi Eric

A great shot. Sharp, attractive colours, good exposure and a depth of field that stops the background from competing with the subject. My only criticism is the composition. I think the image would be a little more interesting if the butterfly was on a line of thirds, if some of the left hand side was removed.

Hi Eric,
What a beautiful sharp and colourful image. Cropping off on the left and also a little at the top will, in my opinion, further improve the composition. Well done.
Neels

Hello Eric, a lovely mix of colours with good light management.
The bokeh is beautiful too.
I agree with Robert that the butterfly might look better not so centrally placed, but still a great shot.
Regards Jean.

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  • lauro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 71 W: 5 N: 78] (874)
  • [2014-09-14 7:20]

Hi Eric
This is an interesting image because of the natural looking colours and shallow depth of field, plus the pin sharp focus on your beautiful subject.
I agree with the composition issues mencioned before, however this photo has many atractive qualities and I would like to see a repost of it with better composition.
Regards,
Lauro

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  • leeno Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 41] (725)
  • [2014-09-15 20:03]

Beautiful composition.
Good DOP .
Like the post of butterfly on lantana.

Leeno

Hi,

Very impressive and good timing.

Kishore

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