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Lady in red


Lady in red
Photo Information
Copyright: Giap Thai (cafe) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 79 W: 0 N: 25] (1237)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009
Categories: Portrait
Camera: canon 350d, 70 - 200 f/4L
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-04-10 2:07
Viewed: 3079
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I'm unexperienced with the light. It seems to be overexposured in some areas in her face. Maybe I should have reduced 1/3 stop in EV .

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Thank you all for useful comments.
Giap .
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I hardly see any overexposure in her face, Giap. I'd rather say the background looks a tad too washed-out. I would have selected and darkened it a bit by postprocessing - but not too much as it may not detract our attention from your model on the foreground.
I like the way you "embedded" her in this scenery, creating an interesting contrast between the dark wall and the flashy red of her long cloth. I think I just would have opted for a POV a little more to the left, leaving out some centimeters of the right part of the photo (even if this implies cropping a part of the red cloth). In my opinion, indeed, there is a bit too much "useless" space in the back of your model.
A model who achieved a good pose and facial expression : static, enigmatic - coherent.
Interesting work...
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

bonjour Giap

superbe portrait, belle lumière , quelles couleurs

un précieux modèle,

bravo à vous

dd

hello Giap
great shot mate
wonderful light and exposure
fine red and lovely expression
this is a great shot
fine work
beautiful model.
just thinking of an offcent composition
good shot

regards
Manuj Mehta

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  • Jens Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 555 W: 53 N: 1139] (4663)
  • [2009-04-10 2:58]

Hi Giap
Wonderful shot, real nice composition, splended light, good shadows, in my opinion the light on her face are nearly perfect, therefor I think you have made a real good work. Makes me want to go back to east asia. Enjoing looking at it, thats wat photo is about. My compliments.
Greetings
Jens.

Nothing wrong with this shot at all - no OE to speak of! I like the richness of colour in her dress and the lantern. The composition, although centred, is about right for this shot, given the way the dress sits beneath her.

The only changes really would be very minor; remove the branches/leaves above her head and in the top left corner of the frame; perhaps allow a little more space on the left. But overall - stunning.

Rew

the light is good, good use of contrasting colors. sharp & crisp capture...I like it. TFS

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2009-04-10 3:31]

Hello Giap,

An amazing lady dressed in red creating an amazing composition. Sharp and accurately exposed. The details in the whole photo are excellent. Very good job and high definition presentation.
Congratulations.

Francis Xavier

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  • bakyy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 64 W: 36 N: 32] (1200)
  • [2009-04-10 4:28]

hi Giap
beautiful women and portrait in natural ambient
god colors and capture
regarda Bane

Hi Giap,
Beautiful girl with graceful pose. The lighting was excellent.
Tony

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  • ade71 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 241 W: 35 N: 211] (2850)
  • [2009-04-10 8:40]

Hi Giap, I think you made a good work. Beautiful picture, colours, light and compliments to the model too.
Adele

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665)
  • [2009-04-10 10:32]

hi Giap

In my view, this is a wonderful portrait because you have done a nice work for a few good reasons

.great red dress and yellow lantern
.good choice of location and sunlight
.pretty lady with nice smile and hairdo
.superb pose

I would do some changes here
.crop off just above her head
.move a bit to the right so her arm is not fronting the rock

Great work!

tfs, bill

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189)
  • [2009-04-10 23:47]

Hi Giap...
Beautiful fashion shot...
Nice colors, composition...
Regards...
Andro

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 0 N: 1852] (14495)
  • [2009-04-11 7:53]

a classic and very stylisch picture Giap,wwonderful lady and dress.

jan

Stunning color and light in this shot. The detail is fantastic and I don't think it is overexposed. Welcome back to TL and I hope you continue to post such nice images more often. TFS

indeed the light is harsh on the neck
the girl is BEAUTIFUL !!!
jc

I've seen your second version, it lacks some more space in front of the girl, maybe another format, like this one ???

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