|[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note|
|This was taken at an elementary school's Sports Day just seconds after this team won the tug-of-war.|
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Among the issues faced with this shot (the camera focused on the trees in the background, rather than the girls in the foreground) there is a lack of connection with any one individual.
I realise you wanted to show the "team" having won, but remember that human connections work better at a more intimate, one-on-one level.
If you illustrated the joy of the team by focusing on one member (perhaps the girl in the foreground) and zoomed more tightly on her expressio and celebration, I think the shot would be more powerful.
Just my thoughts!