|Copyright: infinite jang (jang) (80)|
|Date Taken: 2010-04-04|
|Exposure: f/6.3, 1/800 seconds|
|More Photo Info: [view]|
|Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop|
|Date Submitted: 2010-05-07 9:05|
|[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note|
|When I was young, I find a composition I like...|
Hi Jang .. I really like this. I like the unsaturated look of the brick wall, with just a tinge of color in the magnolia stems and flowers. Love the shadows too. To me, it's a very artistic shot. I could see a few improvements though, and have prepared a workshop. Hope you don't mind.
I thought it could benefit from straightening. and also .. I find that if you add a thin black border around your picture, the white areas don't get lost in the frame.
Have a nice weekend.
And welcome to TL :)
- [2010-05-07 10:02]
I wish you the warmest of welcomes to TL. I really like this photograph. It is very simple but is done brilliantly! Very nice point of view and I like the shadows on the brick wall.