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Murmur


Murmur
Photo Information
Copyright: infinite jang (jang) (80)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-04-04
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/800 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2010-05-07 9:05
Viewed: 1657
Points: 4
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When I was young, I find a composition I like...
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To cmd213: Hi Christianjang 1 05-07 12:35
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Hi Jang .. I really like this. I like the unsaturated look of the brick wall, with just a tinge of color in the magnolia stems and flowers. Love the shadows too. To me, it's a very artistic shot. I could see a few improvements though, and have prepared a workshop. Hope you don't mind.
I thought it could benefit from straightening. and also .. I find that if you add a thin black border around your picture, the white areas don't get lost in the frame.
Have a nice weekend.
And welcome to TL :)
Trudy

Hello Jang,

I wish you the warmest of welcomes to TL. I really like this photograph. It is very simple but is done brilliantly! Very nice point of view and I like the shadows on the brick wall.

Very ncie!

Christian

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