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Copyright: Hartanto Tan (agetan) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 73 W: 48 N: 145] (1596)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-25
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/2, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-12-25 18:18
Viewed: 2054
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Merry Christmas to all....

Took this images yesterday with a group of friends from Singapore. (www.alphadslr.com)

The theme was Japan.

This was taken outdoor under shade using ambient lighting.

I was intrigue with her red lips and using the diagonal lines to frame the image.

PP to brighten her teeth a little and overall adjusted the WB.

Hope you like it.

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Bonjour Hartanto,
I love the crop!. Perfect use of DOF. You can post images up to 200k and yours is only 85k. The quality of the result would be improved. Congratulations!

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  • mejor Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 4 N: 12] (730)
  • [2007-12-25 18:54]

Hi, Hartanto
Nice color, composition and contrast.
I like it
TFS.

Hi Hartanto
i like how you take the shot and crop the image
Nice composition and very sharp
Great PP Work
Well done

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  • yvera (34)
  • [2007-12-25 20:20]

Halo Hartanto

Wow, she looks very beautiful and mysterious
Love this pic, well done.

Salam,
v

Very nice one! Colours are good, the composition is intriguing and dramatic, the light works beautifully.

Fantastic work
Rew

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189)
  • [2007-12-25 23:22]

Beautiful shot...
Nice composition and colors...
Greetings from Montenegro...
Andrija

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  • Jong Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 428 W: 0 N: 273] (3168)
  • [2007-12-26 0:32]

wow strong red lip colour against other soften colours. great composition

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  • Dee Silver Star Critiquer [C: 47 W: 1 N: 7] (435)
  • [2007-12-26 3:08]

Nice compostion, love the crop here, great colours

TFS
Danielle

good job. specially the sharpness and focus on the lips. the total composition is very atractive.

Hi,
Your composition is very interesting, the colors soft, the focus perfect
on the subject.
Very artistic.
Well done and TFS

Hello again

nice one two simple and efficiant, great composition and use of dof

TFS

Olivier

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 0 N: 1852] (14495)
  • [2007-12-29 12:40]

Amazing sharpness and erotic...
jan

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  • Freddie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1285 W: 104 N: 1157] (6359)
  • [2008-01-05 19:27]
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Oh, this is lovely, Hart! I like it! I like how you framed her in the picture. Good focus and blur of DOF. Very good lighting and exposure. Well done.
Cheers!
Happy Holidays!
Freddie :)


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