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My Throne!


My Throne!
Photo Information
Copyright: Ernito Osito (shredhead) (57)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04-10
Categories: Humorous
Camera: Nikon D40X, Nikkor 18-55 f/3.5-5.6G ED AF-S DX
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/2 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-04-10 10:28
Viewed: 1721
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Practicing with available light.
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To jimmyjimmy: Thanks!shredhead 1 02-09 09:16
To Dai: Thanks!shredhead 2 04-14 00:50
To Reflex: WCGreenBaron 1 04-10 11:32
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Hi Ernie,
Practise more and use a better subject, this is poor and pathetic. Learn from other TL members, looking at this "image" you only can improve.
Hans

I have the same in my home. In that, we are universal. Is that your message ? ;-
For the rest, the light is burned and the picture blurred. You can certainly do something better !
Best regards
Jean

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  • [2009-04-10 11:45]
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Well Ernie if I understand your aim, I don't agree with the treatment of your picture : light, POV, colors,.... You can do much better, I'm sure.
Regards
Pascal

I hate to pour on, but this is a part of life that is best done in private, not splashed on the pages of TL for the world to see. To make it better?? Not sure if that is possible. How about another subject?

Did you try the version with the seat up ?
Usually works much better.

g.

..............

BTW: Do you sit when you pee ?

Ernie
Perhaps f you had replaced the toilet paper and allowed that to drape over the seat and onto the floor it would have made the image a little more interesting - I've done a quick workshop on the image but the finished workshops is almost equally as boring as the original image - sorry buddy.

Dai

Hello Ernie

I like the humour in this. The window open for ventelation, no paper,............and yes it is the mans throne. This can be a hard bunch of people here on TL when it comes to critiques. Hang in there.

Jimmy

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