Practise more and use a better subject, this is poor and pathetic. Learn from other TL members, looking at this "image" you only can improve.
- [2009-04-10 11:29]
I have the same in my home. In that, we are universal. Is that your message ? ;-
For the rest, the light is burned and the picture blurred. You can certainly do something better !
- [2009-04-10 11:45]
Well Ernie if I understand your aim, I don't agree with the treatment of your picture : light, POV, colors,.... You can do much better, I'm sure.
I hate to pour on, but this is a part of life that is best done in private, not splashed on the pages of TL for the world to see. To make it better?? Not sure if that is possible. How about another subject?
Perhaps f you had replaced the toilet paper and allowed that to drape over the seat and onto the floor it would have made the image a little more interesting - I've done a quick workshop on the image but the finished workshops is almost equally as boring as the original image - sorry buddy.
I like the humour in this. The window open for ventelation, no paper,............and yes it is the mans throne. This can be a hard bunch of people here on TL when it comes to critiques. Hang in there.