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Colors of autumn


Colors of autumn
Photo Information
Copyright: alper oztutar (twin) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 350 W: 105 N: 198] (7374)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-10-07
Categories: Portrait
Camera: canon 350d, Canon EF 100-400 f/4.5-5.6 L IS
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Fernando (favorites), Beautiful Women Portraits, Century Club (more than 100 points), Jure Dolzan's favs 2 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-10-30 6:16
Viewed: 9712
Favorites: 7 [view]
Points: 110
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Place: St. Petersburg Russia
Model : Tati
Taken nearly 10 metres away by using tele lens...
light source is, horizantal sunlight...
This is my first photo...
I hope you like :)
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Nice shot and model. Skin requires some blur.
TFS
v.
P.S. Why SPRING??? I guess you meant autumn...

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  • WIN Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 133 W: 12 N: 64] (1510)
  • [2005-10-30 6:46]

Yes, I like it very much. Beautiful autumn's colours. Welcome and keep clicking:)

Lukas.

Offcourse we like it, how could we don't? You got it all don't you? a beautiful girl, a nice scenery as background, light and mood.

Mario

Ahh: Spring???

Very nice photograph with wonderful colours. The only comment to add is that I would have perhaps kept the framing a bit looser (wider). Not much, but just enough to come under her bust on the left and down to the shoulder/hair at the bottom (and perhaps a little more space at the top). At the moment it looks like the model is slipping out of the frame - and, whilst the background has nice colours and is interesting, it is the model that we are mostly interested in.

My god that woman is beautiful. Very cool colors and lighting. Very warm colors. I don't think you need that much space on the right side of her though. I would either crop it out, get closer or move a little to the left. Nice photo though. Welcome to TL! JP

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  • Eden Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 167 W: 50 N: 86] (2084)
  • [2005-10-30 12:35]

Hi Alper and welcome to TL. Beautiful first posting, rich warm colours and well composed.

Cheers,
Martha

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  • btokaz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1049 W: 127 N: 167] (5744)
  • [2005-10-30 15:08]

Very nice autumn shot. Very nice colors and another details. I like autumn...
Tomasz

Everything is beautiful.

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  • artabb Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 341 W: 34 N: 182] (3637)
  • [2005-10-30 17:07]

Lovely autumn colours Alper particularly on the left bottom side...

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  • toni Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 132 W: 0 N: 32] (793)
  • [2005-10-30 17:29]

Hi Alper
Très joli portrait. Bon travail
Toni

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  • fmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 81 W: 0 N: 44] (503)
  • [2005-10-30 20:07]

The gold warm light gives a feeling of chocolat with almonds...Congratulations.

This is a very beautiful photo with a beautiful woman...Tati. I think everyting is perfect in this composition...a favorite...my compliments.

Jos

Very beautiful shot indeed! (and model, of course!!)

The skin needs a bit of work: blurring, heal tool and so on, but nothing major.

Looking forward to more!

Philippe

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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1153 W: 70 N: 1116] (16)
  • [2005-11-07 12:15]

I love the colors. You did well & welcome to TL.
Mitra

In deed you start with the amazing photo.
I know you are a good photographer.
Now you are my favourite.
Tar

Amazingly sharp portrait Alper with brilliant colours. Marvellous composition.

Peter

Wonderful portrait.
Looks natively and .... tasty so!
Great detail and color, VERY WELL DONE.

Malik & Mary.

Well done Alper, this is a great pov of your model...the colours are warm, making this a very good composition.
TFS
Liz

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  • fer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 741 W: 119 N: 910] (8190)
  • [2005-11-10 6:03]

Hi Alper,

You make a great work with this model!Great colors and detail.
Obrigado,
Fernando

..what a wonderful colours and model.. cool pic. bravo
denis

Alper,

Another great shot, tfs.

GT

Great light, and superb model! A beautiful pic!

Wow.
I don't know how say.
I don't speak english well.
But it is a geat photo and model.
Thanks for share.

Really nice pic. Good model

this girl is HOT! nice capture

awesome shot in the first try :)

WOW, I just saw your photo today. It's amazing. The colors, lighting, and the model all looks great. I added to my fav :)
Regards,
Mohammadreza

Beautiful picture. Very nice colors very warm, great shot

Her hair just goes well with the background, Golden! I must say that this is one of the crisp and awesome pictures I have seen here in TL.

Her skin might need some pp work blur or clone tool from PS might do it. Overall she's quite stunning with her pose, your composition, the colors, and the background as well.

very attractive women,i would have cropped the right area a bit as the leaves at the bottom are quite sharp and draw your eye away from the girl,the focus around her face may need to be softened a bit as it is too sharp,but still a very enjoyable photograph to look at,well done!.

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  • Quos Silver Star Critiquer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 4] (183)
  • [2006-02-05 23:45]

nice composition...beautiful effect as well as the model....
I like it
Cheers

Alper bu fotografin cok hos.

hi
good dof and nice light
great colros
but skin is so plastic :(
regards

I've just noticed your latest posting which I think is a great shot, but it was this one I wanted to comment about. I think this is fantastic the way the rich tones of the fallen leafs match the tones and colours of the girls hair and skin. The lighting is perfect and even better as it is only natural light. the important details (eyes) of the model are nice and sharp and looking into the camera as they do make a contact with the viewer of the picture.

Great shot (as are many of your other photos

Andrew

Really beautiful !! I like the colors, I like the pose and the model is really... wow !! My question is : who is her hairdresser ?? ;))
If you could make a mix of the 2 versions, make the teeth as clear as the 2nd and keep the rest of the first, it would be absolutely perfect (to me !!).
Yann.

Superb portrait. Very nice work. I think the cropping is about right - enough to bring attention to her face and not much else. The colours work incredibly well; the warmth of her skin tones compliment the warmth of the leaves behind her. Excellent DOF and great sharpness on the model's face.
Great work!

Hi Alper
Nice shot of the lady agianst orangish color. Her hair & skin tones going well with the background. The Yellowish tone throughout adding dramatic effect in her beauty & off course you shot as well. TFS

Lovely Young Girl. The warm colours suit her perfect.
Jan

cok guzel
lovely photo, everything is perfect - colours, model, composition..
i like it much!

This one I like it more, her face is here seductive and very expressive.

The pose is good, as the colour tones-

Bravo

marco

Alper, again for that third shot I will say the same, incredible colors and definition, very impressive and you translate very strongly the beauty of Tati. Bravo!
Patrick

My goodness, what a debut ... but(!)(and there will always be a'but'), as Valich says she needs a little blurring/softening. About 3 on gaussian blur on photoshop on a dupilcate layer on which you can then use the erase too to bring out the eyes and the lips.

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1350 W: 102 N: 1081] (9125)
  • [2006-10-04 14:03]

Hi Alper, Very good presentation. The head on the angle is good, as are the colours. Beautiful result. Murray.

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  • Nezihi (65)
  • [2006-11-04 2:42]

Merhaba Alper,
Kisacasi guzel bir calisma olmus.Tebrikler.
Eline saglik.Selamlar.

Saffet

The pose is well and the light's color on the skin is nice. Also the color of the background is very charming.

Faboulous!
Darn good and sexy but not vulgar!
Have fun,
JD

beautiful image. the colors, the composition and everything is very strong and beautifully shot. nice work

this is a lovely shot..

Beautiful shot. Great colours. Nice composition.

Absolutely perfect !
Model and landscape is great !!
Nice colours and everything well proportionned.
Nice shot !

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  • Mahd (69)
  • [2007-05-12 15:16]

Hi Alper
Light and colours is great...
TFS

Très belles couleurs, et modèle très charmant !!!

Hi Alper: Nice shot. Great choice of background, and your model is gorgeous, truly a golden girl. The only semi-obvious areas for improvement that I can see are try to eliminate the shine/glare on her skin (forehead, left cheek & chin) The shine makes it look like too much makeup in my opinion. Maybe a slightly wider shot, with your model a bit more centered? It's just a thought. Your model really is a work of art, and that intense autumn color in the background really compliments her; her hair is like spun gold. The whole composition serves to sort of frame her face & provides a really good compliment & contrast for her lovely blue/grey eyes. The lighting really made this shot glow. A great 1st submission! Regards, Erik.

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  • shahx Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 34 N: 58] (662)
  • [2007-07-29 11:46]

Amazing colors and lighting. Very good composition.
Shahid

Stunning image Alper, fantastic Autumn colours which are reflected in the models skin tones.

I see this is an early image, I must have a look through your gallery.

TFS, Gray

Portrait wonderful.. they are fascinated from the beauty of this face, the colors of the eyes and the autumnal warm colors.
Thanks of heart for to have shared this beautifulst image.

Regards
Francesco

Wonderful tones and excellent sharpness and DOF... Beautiful model, although a little too centered in the frame, for my taste..

Beauty and brainy,warm colours,excellent details,very nice frame,
well done alper.

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  • CCJWay (65)
  • [2009-01-07 9:39]
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Lovely composition, brilliant autumn colours. Outstanding depth of field. Image sharp. However I would have preffered to see more of the models lower part of the body (breast). The hair accross the face is a bit distracting. Keep shooting.

Realy beautyful photo, color is hot beautyful girl, i love it.

Outstanding colors great shot!!
Beautiful model in a vivid background :)

Excellent photograph, i really like the composition and the colors..
Cheers!

Beautiful shot and model, I dont think anyone will be looking at the leaves!
TFS,
john

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