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Innocent mind(Typhoon Ondoy)

Innocent mind(Typhoon Ondoy)
Photo Information
Copyright: Ron Abay (rr_abay) (14)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-09-27
Categories: Event
Exposure: f/8, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-10 18:30
Viewed: 2094
Points: 4
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Nice photograph here with the message of hope even in times of desperation. However, the colour mixing in this situation detracts from the situation here and a full B&W image would have been more telling in my humble opinion. Some notes would have also been useful in describing this image and how you feel about it.


Sweet shot - would've preferred to see the girl a little more inside the frame, just a slight pan to the left would've made all the difference.

The photographer's signature really ruins it for me!

A Photographer's Note would be nice too!


nice shot!
but it's especially the background that takes my attention.
the girl should be taken more inside the frame actually.

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