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Springs are for everyone II

Springs are for everyone II
Photo Information
Copyright: Eman Muncal (graemann) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 345 W: 60 N: 207] (5166)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11-04
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Olympus Evolt 510, Olympus Zuiko Digital 12-60 mm f/2.8-4
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-06 1:14
Viewed: 1709
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note

Thanks for viewing the first one.

In this one, I was trying to make it look like a cage of some sort. Maybe I should have just cropped the green ones. Or the bend. But I wanted to make it still a toy.

Anyway, I resized and Sharpen in PP.

Thanks for the visit.

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To rewshearer: slinkygraemann 2 11-06 17:22
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nice display of colours and love the DOF too. yor POV is just right for this impressive work! well done!


Hello Eman! Original composition. Very interesting abstract. Good contrast, very good sharp. Nice light and colours. Good work. Well done!

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  • obi Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 8 N: 16] (78)
  • [2008-11-06 1:32]

Hi Eman,
I don't think you should have cropped the green. It fits perfectly in the picture.

Alô Eman,
Great suite. Very good colors, details and sharpness.
Very interesting.

Perfectly sharp and nice colours in a very good composition ! Well done !
Best regards

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1273 W: 0 N: 1] (12005)
  • [2008-11-06 10:34]

Hi Eman
This is a very artistic picture.
Good composition and colour.
Gr Jos

good close up, the crop is well done, nice colored graphic, fine lighting and contrasts

Slinkys make a great subject and this one is well captured. Good use of the shallow DOF, good use of light also. Nice tight framing.

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