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Alone
Photo Information
Copyright: Jessy Balanag (jessybalanag) (12)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-03-05
Categories: Nature
Camera: NIKON D200, 28-70mm tamron f2.8
Exposure: f/8, 1/1600 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): ArtByFoto2 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2010-03-07 21:22
Viewed: 2290
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This photo was taken at Pasdong, Atok, Benguet, Philippines. Pasdong is where the Amburayan River takes its root. I took the image because the mountain where the tree stands only has that tree on it due to continuous burning of trees for conversion to farm lands.

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  • mukesh Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 672 W: 100 N: 467] (5062)
  • [2010-03-07 22:32]

Hi Jessy
Welcome to TL. This is quite well thought of and composed
picture for someone who has started taking picture only from
April 2009. The tree is well placed and diagonal straight takes
you to the main subject. I also like that touch of grassy
surface of the slope. My only concern would be that small patch
on the top right corner (cloud?). That could have been cleaned
to give a neater look to the picture.
A wonderful start...wish you happy learning here on TL
Mukesh

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  • Tezza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 213 W: 97 N: 368] (3380)
  • [2010-03-07 22:38]

Welcome to TL. I really like your first posting. The single tree on the dramatic diagonal makes a strong image. Since there is very little colour in the shot I wonder if it would have more impact if you converted it to black and white.
I hope this is the first of many successful TL postings.

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  • rychem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 736 W: 13 N: 634] (21244)
  • [2010-03-08 0:39]

Welcome to TL, beautiful minimalistic shot, very well composed, the tree seems really to be alone
regards
Ryszard

Hello Jessy,
A very original composition, simple and effective with a great graphic impact.
An other version in WS.
Welcome on TL !!!
Kind regards
Jean

Minimalism works. BR Joerg

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