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the boat girl


the boat girl
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Copyright: Regis Fx (melchior) (154)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04-03
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/6.7, 1/180 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-04-24 10:31
Viewed: 1637
Points: 3
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2nd photo of these charming little girl...tomorrow she will be at an ACDC concert !! promise
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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 13 N: 1404] (6384)
  • [2009-04-24 11:22]
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Realy good picture of daily life in the Philipines - Looking forward to seeing pics of her rocking to AC/DC. Did you do any PP work before posting? any notes on this would be helpful. TFS

Cheers
Bri

Good subject, good colours, but the composition is very weak. She is completely in the centre of the frame and it really takes away any dramatic impact of the shot.

You may find some of these links on composition helpful.

I also find the out-of-focus leaves in the foreground spoil the purity of the shot and don't add anything to it.

Keep shooting - I can see you will soon be doing fantastic work!

Rew

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