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Copyright: Alec Tempongko (alecnorman) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 10 W: 1 N: 84] (3289)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-03-18
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 20D
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-03-24 8:55
Viewed: 3554
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I was walking down the road when I saw this young girl sitting by this window in a perfect pose. I asked if I can take her photo and she just smiled.
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Hi Alec
Perfect job.Well done.Frame and colors very nice.childiren face very good.Good job.


I like her eyes looked at your camera with a bashful smile.Good compo!And good use of light!

Fantastic composition. I really enjoy the texture in the wall and the expression on the subject. Great shot! TFS

Hi Alec,
Wonderful composition: frame within a frame. A sweet and coy girl sitting off-centred on the frame dressed in an attractively bright orange dress certainly draws one's attention to your image. May I suggest that you crop off the little white patch at the top left corner which does distract a little.

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 574 W: 62 N: 749] (5437)
  • [2006-03-24 10:45]

Your photo is very well composed and your subject is very well framed and emphasized against the dark background. Very well done.


Great candid shot Alec, a frame within a frame. Nice one. Composition is perfect. And a charming smile as well.


Thanks for this one. I like the barren frame then the girl with a beautiful smile.

Well done Alec.


Well done, Alec!
Everything feels right about this image, don't think I'd change one mm...
Composition, subject, colours, details, all just right... Well done indeed!
Pablo -

Very nice shot Alec. good composition, natural frame, expression, beautiful colors. Well done...

More than Beautiful. Lovely and cute portrait.

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