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from under the mango tree


from under the mango tree
Photo Information
Copyright: George Gutierrez (bingbong) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 0 N: 25] (609)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-08-09
Categories: Nature, Mood
Camera: Nikon D-50, AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-55mm F3.5-5.6G ED, 52mm Kenko UV filter
Exposure: f/18.0, 1/80 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-09-11 16:17
Viewed: 3903
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
while in albay hoping to see the majestic mount mayon while erupting, we came upon this valley where lava from the previous eruption flowed. this mango tree is the sole survivor of its kind in this town. i took this photo at dusk and you can see the thick cloud formation that covered the perfect cone-shaped volcano.
pp: reduced the midtone levels, added a new layer and soft-brushed it with ochre, color-blended with the bg layer to give it a sepia tone.


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ok...ok...

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  • cyiu Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 215 W: 0 N: 48] (1139)
  • [2006-09-11 17:32]
  • [+]

Hi George,

Nice compositions and choice for b/w

Well Done

Chris

Very nice composition.

The clouds are good. The tree in silhouette. The detail of the people are not that seen. How about increasing the shadow till they become silhouette?

But that's just me.

TFC.

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  • peetol Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 554 W: 51 N: 694] (5745)
  • [2006-09-11 18:54]
  • [2] [+]

This has very good tonal values. Exposure is even throughout. But by centrally placing the tree in the frame, you made it feel unbalanced because of the other elements in the picture. Since the tree is leaning to the right, you should have panned the camera to the right a bit and create space to counter the dominant element. By reducing the human elements to one or two, you may also have created more impact.

But this is a picture well seen!

p.s. seryoso ng critique, ano? hehehe!

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  • Krima Gold Star Critiquer [C: 85 W: 7 N: 2] (1769)
  • [2006-09-11 19:04]
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Hi George!
Too perfect :)) Well done. I like it a lot
Best regads,
Crina

Very good shot George. Great atmosphere...
Tomasz

Great perspective, love the silhouettes!

Alli

points tomorrow....

great compo! the sephia tone really added drama to it. One little suggestion, next time make them fall in line towards the mango tree align with edge of the hill so it will create an effect like walk to the valley of the shadows of death or the song "crossroads" by BnH:)

ang ganda 'tol! very nice sepia pp work here, the choice to silouette the people was the right one here, nice dramatic clouds.

looking forward to more!

alex

The mood excellent, I like the silhouetted tree most notably the human figures, well done man. Cheers always.

Thanks/Salamat,
Jeffrey

galeng galeng. ang ganda. not much to say, just pure admiration.

Hi George,
Nice shot with the silouhettes under the tree. Very well done and TFS.
Hans

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  • rio Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 134 W: 4 N: 64] (940)
  • [2007-03-17 7:57]

galing ng kuha mo!
parang gusto kong umuwi ulit!

i just hope the tree wasnt in the middle of the framing, prang mas ma drama pag ganun,

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