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Walk on By


Walk on By
Photo Information
Copyright: dave banfield (davejb) (70)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2013-07-16
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/22, 1/350 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2015-02-11 7:41
Viewed: 1071
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Just leaving area when I took one last look back and caught this shot, more or less. Okay, less. It looked empty with just the woman so added the monks. Okay?
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Hi Dave

this is another great picture and I have nothing but admiration for it. My only comment is that perhaps the clouds are a little blue.

I hope you don't mind, but I've done a workshop to see if I could bring out more texture in the wood, because I thought it was a little pale. I think I failed.

Hi Dave,
Beautiful colors in this unique daily life composition. The light are shadows are really wonderful.
TFS
Regards,
Lurdes

Is it OK? Yes, very much so. The composition is excellent with the woman in exactly the right position and the monk walking towards the vanishing point in the distance. It is a thought-evoking image and, to my mind, that is one of the main objectives of photography. Well done.

PS: You obviously could do some more work on this image such as finding the best balance between brightness and contrast, and adjusting the slight tilt, but that is fine-tuning to the preference of the artist.

Hello Dave! Wonderful shot. Amazing woman. Superb monk. Interesting wooden pier. Good composition. Great effect. Regards!

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