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a red and white carnation

a red and white carnation
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Copyright: Akihisa Kitanosono (AKITA) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-04-01
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS 7D
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/40 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-04-03 0:33
Viewed: 1801
Points: 28
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a red and white carnation
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Hello Akihisa,

Great colour combination here. The red-white-green together makes it a wonderful photo. TFS.


Hi Akihisa
What a lovely capture this white-red flower!
Perfect details and colors.

Hello Akihisa,

Very good macro shot of this beautiful flower.
Excellent focus, sharpness and colors.

Best regards,

Hello Akihisa,
These beautiful tabby petals utánzhatatlan, inviting eyes.
Nicely demonstrates once again the beautiful flowers of a new member
Greetings my friend.

Hola Akihisa
Precioso clavel de dos colores que parece un traje andaluz , excelente color ,luz y texturas ,gran realismo ,una hermosa composicion , gracias por compartir esta excelente foto

Buen trabajo
Buen fin de semana

Hi Akihisa,

A very beautiful and sensitive shot the colours are great the pale green accentuates the red and white of the carnation. The dof is good details are sharp presentation first class imho.


Hello Akihisa,

Yesterday we got one and today two of them, great :-)
TFS this beauty with us. Great colors here with perfect light conditions. Very good details and sharpness and a nice crop.
The grainy BG gives a nice view over them. Very good POV.
Congrats and TFS.

Have a great WE,

Hello Akihisa! Superb shot. Nice natural lightness, very nice colours. Good contrast. Perfect exposure. Superb effect. Well done!

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1583 W: 40 N: 3488] (13942)
  • [2010-04-03 6:35]

Hi Akihisa
Side lighting emphasizes texture and form,the flower radiates the warm light showing off its detailed petals.
Very nice shot

Dear Akihisa
lovely carnation. pretty colors. good contrast.
good close up shot for clear petals.
nicely composed and presented.

Hello Akihisa San,
What a lovely composition of this lovely gradient colors of this delicate carnation,the lighter Fg against the darker Bg is wonderful contrast from lighting POV,well exposed and beautifully composed,well captured and lovely presentation my friend.
Have a wonderful weekend

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2010-04-03 14:39]

Hi Akihisa,
A wonderful macro of this red and white carnation in accurate sharpness.
Beautiful directional lighting and very sharp edges of the petals.
Nice shadows and a nice bud in between.
The accompanying white flowers are serving as support to the odd-one-out!
Beautiful presentation.
My best regards,

Francis Xavier

Hello dear Akihisa!

A very lovely shot in vivid colors and beautiful details. Nice focus and sharpness with good light and exposure.

TFS, indeed a beautiful shot!

Best Regards,

Ciao Akihisa, great macro of lovely flower, fine details and splendid sharpness, wonderful light and colors, very well done my friend, ciao Silvio

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