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a Post Card from KOBE

a Post Card from KOBE
Photo Information
Copyright: was wib (waswib) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 25 W: 0 N: 15] (441)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-14
Categories: Nature
Camera: Sony DSC F828 Cybershot, Carl Zeiss T* 28-200
Exposure: f/8, 1/25 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-08-16 0:28
Viewed: 2652
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 25
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken from Akashi Bridge , near Kobe.
The bridge which connects to other island.
They said, it is the longest bridge in Japan,
or even in the world ?

Hope U like it, any comment or critics are welcomes


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The POV is good, the composition also very interesting, especially because you included the boat near the bridge, but I am not very sure about the light contrast, the right side seems a bit overexposed, and with the tones you chose makes a very big contrast with the left side of the water

Good timing to get the white of the ship against the dark background.

The yellow grabbed my attention on the thumbnail.



yea...the great akashi bridge... nicely shot... very moody and nice colors.. the composition can be improved...i hope to see more of the bridge..thanks for sharing

Amazing. Thumbs up!

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  • Carma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 461 W: 121 N: 299] (4996)
  • [2005-08-16 8:12]

Apocaliptic colours! Look s like air full of poison gas.
Nice composition with the bridge. We can fallow the line very long.
I like this graduated shadows from left to right.

The colors are great! I like the composition giving lot of space to the sea it look like if the bridge was the last gate befre the ocean.

hi waskitho ,
great this photo..very nice colours.well done.


Nice composition and nice colours...bravo!

Stunning photo, Waskitho! I really like the mood you've created with the yellow. The yellow tone plus the long expanse of the bridge, *plus* the endless sea gives a wonderful impression of scale and size. And the photo wouldn't be nearly as impressive without the boat positioned perfectly. Well seen!

love the warmtones, once again. it gives it a surrealistic dawn feel to it. reminds me of "city of angels", where you also see the orange like morning.


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  • arkana Silver Star Critiquer [C: 20 W: 0 N: 0] (1870)
  • [2005-09-04 11:53]

I Just can say, this photo is superb angle, no need any critics..

TFS Bossss

Nice colours.

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  • Alita Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 157 W: 29 N: 0] (917)
  • [2007-01-27 9:14]

hi waskitho
very beautiful effect,
nice gold sky/ocean,
best regards!

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