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smile girl

smile girl
Photo Information
Copyright: Andryan Gusty (gustyAndryan) (52)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04-07
Categories: Mood
Camera: Nikon D70s, Nikkor 18-70mm f/3-4.5 G ED (kit lens)
Exposure: f/4, 1/64 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-03-30 8:05
Viewed: 2023
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
thanks to Cut Nurmi Gusty Ayu .. :))
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She's pretty; the cinematic frame and post-treatment work well, but her eyes/face don't seem as sharp as they could be.

Your signature in the frame really ruins this one for me ... sorry, just my personal thoughts on it.


Hi Andryan...I like your composition here...you placed the subject well. The sharpness should be better and the white balance adjusted a bit...she seems to warm in the tones...Welcome to the site...


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