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gorgeous Suze


gorgeous Suze
Photo Information
Copyright: Arfa Lila (arphaleone) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 55 W: 0 N: 18] (319)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-08-09
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT)
Exposure: f/1.8, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-08-11 3:23
Viewed: 1973
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Thanks to Suzy, a very potential talent.
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Beautiful Line :)

Hello, Arfa -
Very alluring image. Suzy is extremely attractive, but more importantly, you have captured her in such an appealing pose and expression. Wonderful sharpness, particularly with her hair. Fine b&w tones. One minor nit - I might have cropped the top downward slightly to do away with part of the diagonal line above her. Regardless, excellent portrait work.

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  • taba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 161 N: 337] (2163)
  • [2009-08-11 5:33]

Hi Arfa

She's really a very beautiful girl and the take was very attractive..
Good POV and sharpness and I like the B&W in the photo, but I think you should take off the lines and stuffs in the BG with a PP as you did with the color, the line is a bit distractive of the main object.. the girl..

well done.

TFS

Taba

Hello Arfa

Beautiful model
Excellent B-W shot.
Regards

Faruk

Hi Arfa!

She's nice indeed and you captured her a very good pose and caught a nice look out of the picture. Good pp also, TFS!

Best regards,
Andor

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  • Dai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 56 N: 247] (1214)
  • [2009-08-11 13:02]

Yes she is..!

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  • phredz (65)
  • [2009-08-11 20:49]
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WOW... haduh... jadi kebelet pipis!

wow... nice picture sir.... nice POV and extremely pose by model... the straight line very nice pak... great capture..


TFS

Erick :D

hi arfa......this foto was excellent......she was so sexy buddy.......you made it looked more attractive with such pose and style.....good job....warm regards, hafiz

Wow, Great shot bro. Nice pose

I like the way you've used the wide aperture here - very nicely controlled, although you could easily use a smaller aperture and still keep that shallow field of focus.

Her sideways glance is charming, the light here is good and the shot is perfectly metered.

My first thought was 'get rid of the rails in the background' but now I think they add something to the shot, aesthetically they kind of "open up" the negative space into which she is looking.

Nice work!
Rew

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 520 W: 26 N: 1877] (12221)
  • [2009-08-22 10:41]

Wow Arfa....!
This portrait is beautiful.....and so is Suze.....!

Kind regards from Netherlands,
Adri

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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2009-09-07 7:05]

Hello Arfa,

Pretty woman and an excellent portrait!
The choice of B&W works very well here.
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

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  • psyce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 265 W: 25 N: 207] (2856)
  • [2009-09-11 1:52]

gorgeous model.... great shot... great metering.... very nice...TFS

Hi Arfa,
This is a very beautiful portrate. I like Suze’s expression you captured here. May be I would crop out the top part a little.
Misha

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