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Copyright: ali hamzah (alee8891) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 30 W: 2 N: 11] (498)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-05-06
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2011-05-27 5:31
Viewed: 2648
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi TL..
Its been a long long time i didnt post...
critique nd comment are welcome
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Hi Ali...wonderful shot..great focus and light. The only thing I would do differently is to crop the shot in order to bring more focus to your subjects...this is very good.

Roger

I nearly double up on what Roger said. I did a simple workshop to demonstrate. Phil.

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  • izida Silver Star Critiquer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 1] (801)
  • [2011-05-27 10:28]
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Selam Ali,
Cok guzel portre calismasi..
Cok basarili..Mutluluk dilerim
Gulsen

The couple are nicely presented and the earthy colours work well, personally I would suggest not so much space above their heads, because it draws the viewer's eye up to the canopy of the trees - and surely this photograph is about the couple, not the sky!
Rew

Hi Ali,
This is a wonderful shot!
Your models look wonderful. The costume and the bg are also wonderful. But your model's faces are not sharp.

I agree with what Roger and Rew mentioned in their critique.

I did a WS. And I hope you don't mind at all.
Hope you like it.

Keep shooting!
Good job though.

TFS!

-Irene

Hello Ali

What stunning portraits, the rustic tones of the costumes and the surroundings is so attractive, i am truly amazed at this presentation. Do i assume a wedding picture? Welldone TFS

Stv :)

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