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Copyright: ali hamzah (alee8891) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 30 W: 2 N: 11] (498)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-05-06
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2011-05-27 5:31
Viewed: 2648
Points: 9
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Hi TL..
Its been a long long time i didnt post...
critique nd comment are welcome
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Hi Ali...wonderful shot..great focus and light. The only thing I would do differently is to crop the shot in order to bring more focus to your subjects...this is very good.


I nearly double up on what Roger said. I did a simple workshop to demonstrate. Phil.

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  • izida Silver Star Critiquer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 1] (801)
  • [2011-05-27 10:28]
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Selam Ali,
Cok guzel portre calismasi..
Cok basarili..Mutluluk dilerim

The couple are nicely presented and the earthy colours work well, personally I would suggest not so much space above their heads, because it draws the viewer's eye up to the canopy of the trees - and surely this photograph is about the couple, not the sky!

Hi Ali,
This is a wonderful shot!
Your models look wonderful. The costume and the bg are also wonderful. But your model's faces are not sharp.

I agree with what Roger and Rew mentioned in their critique.

I did a WS. And I hope you don't mind at all.
Hope you like it.

Keep shooting!
Good job though.



Hello Ali

What stunning portraits, the rustic tones of the costumes and the surroundings is so attractive, i am truly amazed at this presentation. Do i assume a wedding picture? Welldone TFS

Stv :)

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