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Black, Gray & White


Black, Gray & White
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Copyright: Naseer Fedaee (naseer-afg) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 168 W: 13 N: 79] (551)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2013-11-19
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 500D
Exposure: f/2.5, 1/640 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2014-05-01 4:54
Viewed: 2021
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A Portrait of my friend, Baqir Ahmadi, He is a good painter and his works are wonderful at contemporary style.
I try my best for this portrait, hope hear from you friends about it !

Canon 50mm @ 1.8

Best,
Naseer

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)
  • [2014-05-01 8:34]
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I like how the light is striking your subject, was this taken in a studio? & what light source did you use Naseer? Good capture of the light & shadows which to me adds strength to the facial character of your subject. I'm unsure if the brightness of the hat may be a little to bright, as ones eye is always drawn to the lightest area of a composition & it may distract from your main subject? Well taken. TFS

Ron

What an excellent lights and distinguish details, looks like a detective-movie-portrait well done NASEER FEDAEE

Hi Naseer, Lovely portrait with which the nature of your friend's character has shown perfectly. The shadow on the face near the right eye seems bit distracting but it does strength his facial expression.....all depends how the viewer perceive the image. Over all I am very comfortable with your presentation....very artistic. Thank for sharing
Anna

Hi Naseer,
The light is good an the details on his skin and eyes are highlighted by it. Looks like an intense personality...
Regards,
Lauro

A very handsome, young artist/model there for you...and very nicely photographed by you, too. I like the way the light is hitting part of the face and hat...very nicely done. Would be nice to see some of his work, too...if posting that here is okay.

Hi Naseer..nice shot. Great detail and tones. Nice light.

Roger

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