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Copyright: Naseer Fedaee (naseer-afg) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 168 W: 13 N: 79] (551)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-05-25
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 1000D, Sigma 70 - 300
Exposure: f/6.7, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-11-20 0:12
Viewed: 1676
Points: 10
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Hi Nasser,
A nice portrait of this beautiful girl in her national costume. I like the double presentation with faces looking at each other and the fine use of shallow DOF.
A pleasant composition and good light management. Sharpness is impeccable and the bokeh BG is there while there is a nice contrast between red and green.
Well done,

Francis Xavier

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2011-11-20 0:59]

Hi Naseer

Good symmetry between the in focus woman at right & out of focus woman at left. Excellent fg sharpness & shallow dof with vibrant colour. The diffused light works well here. Tfs!

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  • Usaf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 319 W: 87 N: 312] (2160)
  • [2011-11-20 5:40]

Hello Dear Naseer

very beautiful portrait, nice bright colors. beautiful model with great face expression, the main and the most attractive point in this picture is the model in the BG with same color shawl but looking in opposite direction. very well done.

TFS
Usaf

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1816 W: 39 N: 465] (4859)
  • [2011-11-20 6:55]

Salam Naseer,
This young girl is looking bit tensed. But your composition is impeccable. Excellent focus, fine details and soft luminosity. Great impression had been taken with red on the rule accompanied by other colors. A fantastic snapshot, well done. Thanks for sharing.
Best Wishes,
Inaam

Hi Naseer,
A very nice portrait and pose of this lovely girl with her beautiful red costume,
Excellent focus and sharp picture with a blur background..
well done.
Michel

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