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morning mood
Photo Information
Copyright: Anna Mueller (DieAnnaM) (11)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-29
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon Ixus 65
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2012-10-17 2:17
Viewed: 1755
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Together with some others I was the first leaving the camp after the gates were opened and I was lucky to experience the morning mood that way.

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia:

Etosha National Park is a national park in the Kunene Region of northwestern Namibia. The park shares boundaries with the regions of Oshana, Oshikoto and Otjozondjupa.

Etosha was first established in 1907, when Namibia was a German colony known as South West Africa. At the time, the park’s original 100,000 square kilometres (39,000 sq mi) made it the largest game reserve in the world. Due to political changes since its original establishment, the park is now slightly less than a quarter of its original area, but still remains a very large and significant area in which wildlife is protected.

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Bom dia Anna,
First of all let me give you welcome to this site.
Yours first entry is pretty and reveals a moment of peace and mysticism, under a sweet and engaging light.
Sorry, but you have not been attentive to the horizon line that is not lined up and very slanted to the right.
This, however, is very easy to fix with a good photo editor, for example, the easy Photoscape which can be downloaded for free on the internet. Try it.
I wait for my comments do not bother you.
R.

Hi Anna,
Also a hearty welcome to this site and quite agree regarding the horizon.I would have also given a bit more space on the right and not placed the giraffes slap center.The feeling of open plain is well presented as I can appraciate [ spent the beat 10 years of my life in Namibia ]
Exposure well managed creating the soft morning tones.
Dont give up, keep the images coming.
erwin...

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1474 W: 0 N: 4177] (21534)
  • [2012-10-17 7:41]

Hello Anna :)

Greet among us on TL with the many wishes of splendid pictures!

This first Your picture is very showy in original colours
and beautiful light with two splendid giraffes.
I wish only that the horizon did not "ran away" You, and animals too are introduced centrally.
I work on the programme Picasa which one can too free take he helps sometimes very much.
I hope you will accept my attentions with the smile and we oneself will visit mutually, I wish You the success.

With best wishes.
Barbara

Ciao Anne, welcome on TL, I like yor landscape, but horizon is too tilted and light not good, I try to do a ws, hope you like, I'm waiting for your next, friendly Silvio

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 818 W: 84 N: 1189] (10601)
  • [2012-10-17 21:22]

I dont really mind with the tilt horizon... though I would like if you straighten it. Good moment capture with the giraffes set up nicely with the pose. I would just reduce the empty space to make the view focus more on them

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