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A model friend.

A model friend.
Photo Information
Copyright: Erwin Kruger (Jonathan) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 816 W: 0 N: 376] (13989)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1983-03
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Nikon F801, Nikkon 28-80 mm, Fujichrome Sensia100
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-08-21 3:05
Viewed: 2838
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I now realize the sun was too harsh on her, creating the not so relaxed facial expression.Things we learn through the years of photography.Scanned from an old slide.
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thanks for the note and your humility about this photo. It is still a great capture even while you competed with the sun for a great capture. you can adjust this in photoshop to remove the crease on her forehead and eliminate the light on the darkend part of her cheek so she doesnt look like in pain. anyhow. a cool photo of a time long gone. thanks for sharing and hope to see more of your "old" pictures. cheers

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  • werdir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1416 W: 147 N: 2654] (11957)
  • [2010-08-21 5:57]

Hi Erwin,

Even with the harsh lighting, this is a very good composition. Nice color tones. Interesting pose and location, there is a feeling that your model is one tough lady. Pretty too.


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  • periko Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 121 W: 44 N: 32] (2229)
  • [2014-01-23 15:34]

Hi Erwin
This is a photo of good quality, being so old. I really like it.
Your pretty model looks like crying.


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