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Copyright: mark brunner (markbrunner) (199)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-06
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-05-15 22:25
Viewed: 2566
Points: 16
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To SylFondacci: thank you my friend.........markbrunner 1 05-16 09:09
To rychousmama: thank you my friend.........markbrunner 1 05-16 00:02
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Great colors! That compo is really impressive! I enjoy the nice contrast and the texture of those wall and door! That little mannequin compose expressive completion!

Cute kid. I like the rich bright colors and that white arrow pointing towards the child and the direction she is walking in makes the shot interesting and it has its own character. Really wonderful detail, very sharp, and I like how neither the door nor the child is near the center of the shot, lots of balance and a strong composition that way. The use of natural lighting is great because there is a wonderful shadow of a line across the whole frame and the contrasts are high and dramatic. Good choice to leave in the floor a bit more at the bottom than the space above the door at the top. I also like the sense of textures in the wall and door. Very creative and well-seen, TFS!

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  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1121 W: 2 N: 877] (11866)
  • [2007-05-16 0:21]

An interesting compo, somehow funny, too.
I liked the colors and the little child there! TFS,

Hi Mark,
A great colourful composition with the arrow pointing the child and indicating for her/him an unknown destination and destiny ...

Hi Mark,
Great colors and composition.
Well seen and nicely captured.

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  • nunenik Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 429 W: 21 N: 176] (1890)
  • [2007-05-16 19:07]
  • [2]

Hi Mark,
Great presentation of the idea! Very symbolic that the arrow on the only door is diverting the child away, into another, less colourful direction.

nice and bit funny picture! i like composition and colors here!

fantastic composition and colours!

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