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Coconut sweets


Coconut sweets
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Copyright: Fidy Andr (Fidy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 110 W: 0 N: 79] (598)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2019-08-30
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D3100
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2019-09-09 8:46
Viewed: 50
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Little girl selling coconut toffies. Her smile was so charming that I couldn't resist buying some . Childs having to work to ensure living of family is a real concern in those countries. No PP, just cropped


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To mesquens1: thanksFidy 1 09-13 07:44
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She is lovely, we wish the best for her future....a great picture-image by excellent 3 dimension details and lights indeed another stunning POV well done FIDY ANDR

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 842 W: 26 N: 808] (9366)
  • [2019-09-09 15:22]

Hi,
a nice portrait of the girl with the lovely smile, I think it needs a bit more cropping, the over-exposed part on the left could have been cropped out
cheers
jack

My dear Fidy,
I agree with Jack's remark
In your African shots there is almost always something left over.
Here is the excess light and uselessness of this piece of trunk.
I will offer you a fast WS limiting what is truly beautiful,
including the beautiful girl

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