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Sails at sunset


Sails at sunset
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Copyright: Fidy Andr (Fidy) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 112 W: 0 N: 79] (606)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/3.4, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-12-11 3:33
Viewed: 2843
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Fishing boats heading for home
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Hi Fidy!
Wonderful seascape. Amazing sails. Wonderful pair. Nice colors. Good light and bright. Very good shot.
Cheers!

hi Fidy
nice shot grt pov and good colours maybe a bit noise in the shot but grt effort welcome to trek lens
regards bryan

Ciao Fidy


Beautiful visual of this scenario my friend ..
are my favorites in this category,
the beauty of the warm colors and silhouettes.
I love it! Nice colors.
Good light and bright.
Very well composed.

Sergio

Hello Fidy,
This is a good image of the two sailboats at sunset, to improve on the balance of the image try placing the subjects to the left one third (1/3) of the fraame as if they are entering the scene and not into the middle of the image. When we view an image it is more pleasing to see an object going to the right in the frame as entering and not leaving, this will keep the viewer more interested in the picture. Another rule that will help in photography as well as in art is to use thirds, fifths, etc., uneven numbers to balance a scene. There is nothing wrong with taking the two sailboats, just the balance in the frame.
Hope this helps...
Steve

Nice try but you actually could improve this some more by applying the rule of third and place the horizon 1/3 off the frame. That way, you shot would look much more effective.
It looks like it is lacking in sharpness too.

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  • Clanyi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 254 W: 7 N: 100] (7129)
  • [2012-08-18 10:07]

Hi Fidy! beautiful color of the sky. Regards Csabi

Hello Fidy! This image is not too spicy, but it is nicely composed. This picture has climate. Well you used the light. You managed to create a very intriguing in terms of color photography. Good luck!

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